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shozurei — The Kitsune and the Neko
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Description      It was a cool breezy morning in Konoha Village. A beautiful sunrise could be seen as a figure stepped out onto a balcony. Leaning against the railing, the young man ran his fingers through his short, spiky blond hair, as blue eyes gazed sleepily at the village. From the balcony, all of Konoha could be seen.
     The blond turned slightly, resting on his arm. He ran his hand through his hair again, fingers brushing against the large, red-furred fox ears on top of his head. A long red fox tail trailed down his leg, twitching slightly. Three whisker marks on each cheek curved up as he yawned.
     Hearing footsteps, the 23-year-old kitsune, Naruto Uzumaki, turned as a raven-haired young man stepped through the balcony door. As usual, Naruto’s heartbeat picked up as he looked at the other man; his gaze traveling from the black hair that stuck up in the back like the tail feathers of a duck, and the small black-furred cat ears, to the onyx eyes, and across the pale, creamy, flawless skin to the long black cat tail that swayed gently.
     “Good morning Sasuke,” Naruto said to the neko. “You’re up early today.”
     “What can I say?” Sasuke replied. “It’s hard to sleep when you’re shivering from the cold, because your favorite blanket decided to watch the sunrise.”
     Naruto grinned sheepishly at that, blushing as Sasuke came forward to embrace him. The blond rested his head on the neko’s shoulder, sighing happily. He felt incredibly lucky that he and Sasuke were together. They were both orphans with no family, and no one to care for them. In Naruto’s mind, the fact that they had found each other was nothing short of a miracle. He could still remember the day they had met as if it were yesterday.

10 years ago

     “Sheesh, it’s hot today! What a scorcher!”
     A 13-year-old Naruto Uzumaki jumped through the forest, leaping from branch to branch. He was headed to the lake just outside the village, hoping to cool off with a nice long swim. The lake was one of his favorite places, with crystal clear water that let you see all the way to the bottom, 20 feet below in some spots. There was also a small stream that you could wade in at one end, and plenty of various kinds of fish to catch. It was quiet and very peaceful.
     Reaching the lake, Naruto hopped out of the trees, only to frown when he saw that he wasn’t alone. Another boy, a black-haired neko, was sitting on the shore gazing into the water, occasionally tossing in a pebble. With a start, Naruto saw that the boy was crying.
     Naruto began to edge closer cautiously. Kitsunes and nekos generally didn’t get along, being natural enemies, but Naruto couldn’t stand to see people unhappy. Whenever he saw someone crying, his first instinct was to comfort them. He had nearly reached the boy, when the neko jerked up and spun around, jet-black eyes reddened from tears locking onto his own.
     “W-who are you? What are you doing here?” the neko demanded.
     “I’m Naruto Uzumaki. I was gonna take a swim,” Naruto said uneasily. “Are you alright? Y-you were crying.”
     “That’s none of your business! Leave me alone!” the boy yelled. “Go away!”
     “Ok, ok! You don’t have to yell,” Naruto said, getting annoyed. “I was just concerned, that’s all.”
     “I don’t need your concern, fox. Get lost,” the neko growled.
     “Alright fine. But could you at least tell me your name?”
     The boy glared at Naruto for a full minute before sighing in defeat. “I’m Sasuke Uchiha,” he said reluctantly.
     “Well Sasuke, it’s nice to meet you,” Naruto said cheerfully. “Even if you are a jerk.”
     Sasuke glared angrily, then abruptly stood and brushed off his pants. “If you’re not going to leave, then I will,” he stated. “I didn’t come here to be bugged by a stupid kitsune. Good-bye.”
     He began to walk away, but stumbled and almost fell into the lake. But Naruto quickly reached out and grabbed Sasuke’s arm, pulling him upright.
     “Hey, be careful!” he exclaimed. “The lake’s deeper than it looks. And where we’re standing, it’s a straight drop to the bottom.”
     Sasuke jerked out of Naruto’s grip, then looked at him sullenly. “Thanks,” he grumbled, clearly hating having to say it.
     “You’re welcome,” Naruto said, grinning. “So, do you live in the village? I’ve never seen you before.”
     “I used to. Now if you don’t mind, I really don’t want any company.”
     Sasuke turned to leave, but a small stone shifted under his foot. As he fell backwards, he grabbed at Naruto, pulling the kitsune forward so that they both fell into the lake. Naruto came up quickly, spitting out water.
     “I thought I told-” he began, only to realize Sasuke hadn’t come up.
     He glanced around, then looked down when he noticed a thrashing beneath him. Sasuke was sinking rapidly, a look of sheer panic on his face. Naruto cursed loudly. The neko couldn’t swim? He was drowning!
     Naruto took a deep breath and dove underwater. He swam downward as fast as he could. He reached the neko and grabbed him firmly. The blond began hauling Sasuke to the surface, noting that the boy had fallen unconscious. He reached the surface and swam to the shore. He laid Sasuke out on the grass. Naruto groaned to himself when he saw the neko wasn’t breathing.
     He leaned over the boy and tilted his chin up. He took another deep breath and, bracing himself, blew air into Sasuke’s lungs. Naruto did this a few more times, until Sasuke suddenly gasped and started coughing. He jerked upright, then turned over and threw up. Naruto gently rubbed his back until he was done.
     “That was close,” Naruto said. “Are you alright?”
     “Y-yeah. I think so,” Sasuke said, wiping his mouth. “Thank you.”
     “You’re welcome. It was no big deal, really.”
     Naruto stood up, then helped Sasuke get to his feet. The raven-haired boy looked awful and completely miserable. He leaned heavily against Naruto, shaky from nearly drowning.
     “You don’t look so good. Why don’t I take you home?” Naruto said. “Where do you live?”
     “I don’t have a home anymore,” Sasuke said, barely above a whisper.
     “No home? I- I’m sorry,” Naruto said, shocked. Was that why he was crying earlier? “Well, how about I take you to my place then? It’s not very big, but you can clean up and eat something there.”
     Sasuke was quiet for a moment, then he nodded. The 2 boys began making their way back to Naruto’s house, the kitsune supporting the neko with his arm.
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Comments: 40

9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 00:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Can't find chapter 3 did you make one?

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shozurei In reply to 9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 00:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Not yet. I'm a little stuck on what's going to happen. I'm trying my best though.

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9TailedNaruSasu In reply to shozurei [2009-07-24 00:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I'm sure you'll think of something

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shozurei In reply to 9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 20:06:04 +0000 UTC]

This happens to me on most of my story. I get to a certain point, than- Bam! Can't think of the next part.

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9TailedNaruSasu In reply to shozurei [2009-07-27 02:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that sucks. I cant wait until you think of the next part!

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shozurei In reply to 9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-27 19:17:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm working on it I swear!

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9TailedNaruSasu In reply to shozurei [2009-07-29 04:46:49 +0000 UTC]

I never said you weren't.

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TouketsuKaben [2008-08-11 20:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Aw that was cute ^-^ it's nice to have a light-hearted story to read sometimes...

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shozurei In reply to TouketsuKaben [2008-08-11 22:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I've got a third of chapter 2 written. I'll write the rest after I finish the chapter to my FMA story.

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TouketsuKaben In reply to shozurei [2008-08-11 23:57:26 +0000 UTC]

cool ^-^ think you could let me know when it's posted or should I just check myself? :3

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shozurei In reply to TouketsuKaben [2008-08-12 11:22:39 +0000 UTC]

I'll let you know. It might take a bit though. My muse tends to have a short attention span. I just have to get them to the next morning.

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TouketsuKaben In reply to shozurei [2008-08-15 01:28:13 +0000 UTC]

lol no problem

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Katsuya-Danna [2008-07-30 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting story! It's so adorable and the way you described how they met is almost like how they met in the anime. Great work.

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shozurei In reply to Katsuya-Danna [2008-07-30 23:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to keep them in character as much as possible.

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Katsuya-Danna In reply to shozurei [2008-07-31 00:03:06 +0000 UTC]

That's always a great idea when writing a yaoi fan fiction. I'm currently writing my first chapter for my fan fiction and I've been studying up a lot over the connections between Naruto and Sasuke in the anime and manga.

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shozurei In reply to Katsuya-Danna [2008-07-31 00:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Let me know when it's up.

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Katsuya-Danna In reply to shozurei [2008-07-31 00:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing.

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harrellgirl [2008-07-30 23:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Cute =3 Very creative

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shozurei In reply to harrellgirl [2008-07-30 23:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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AnimeFan-Artemis [2008-05-22 21:29:42 +0000 UTC]

I like!

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shozurei In reply to AnimeFan-Artemis [2008-05-22 22:13:06 +0000 UTC]

I've got one more page written. I just need to get them to the next morning.

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emo-wolfhound [2008-02-10 17:56:38 +0000 UTC]

awwww~~ so cute>.<

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-10 18:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Just so you know, the next chapter may take a while. I need to work on my 3 other stories as well. I'm drowning here!

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-10 18:09:03 +0000 UTC]

ok i can wait^_^,ur welcome

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-10 22:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, writing's tough.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-17 20:43:10 +0000 UTC]

very i wrote a poem in the middle of the night and most of it didn't even make sence

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-19 21:02:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm not good with poetry.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-21 02:37:08 +0000 UTC]

wat why?u don't like it or u just vert tried writing a poem?

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-21 22:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I can't write it. I like to read some poems.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-23 00:44:52 +0000 UTC]

nice i love writing them.hate reading them...idk why.

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-23 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]

That's odd. I need some advice. I'm writing a sasunaru one-shot and I'm having a little trouble. How would I have Sasuke give Naruto a valentine's gift and keep him in character?

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-23 03:04:45 +0000 UTC]

mmmmm wats kind of gift is he gonna give him?cause it depends on the gift mostly

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-23 17:47:52 +0000 UTC]

It's a plush fox with a yellow ribbon tied around its neck, and a chocolate bar. Plus, Sasuke doesn't know how Naruto feels about him.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-24 16:10:54 +0000 UTC]

ok so how bout this naruto goes around giving gifts to everyone like saskura,shika and then,but doesn't give one to sasu wat does he think about this? i wonder.now later one naruto gives sasu a gift nd if u want he can also confess to him. sound good?or no?

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-24 17:04:28 +0000 UTC]

I don't know. I have Naruto really depressed because he never gets valentine's from anyone. I'm having Sasuke ask Iruka for advice, but I'm not sure what Iruka should say.
P.S. Once I'm done with this, I'm never writing one-shots again! They are way too hard!!

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-24 17:52:21 +0000 UTC]

ok so um let me tthink wat would iruka say mmm*thinking*

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ok i think i got it wat if he said something like um u should get him something sweet or errr um ya like some roses or something with some chocolateo' or ya something old sorry idk i really can't think of something iruka would say

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-24 22:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I know what Iruka's gonna do. He'll tell Sasuke to just be honest, and hint that Naruto might just like Sasuke back. Now, what is Sasuke gonna do? The best option is to have him give the fox to Naruto straight out, but that just doesn't seem very Sasuke-like.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-03-01 08:01:07 +0000 UTC]

True maybe someone can have it deliverd for him. Or he can put it at naruto's door ring or knock on the door hide then ya ,but the rest sounds great^^

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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-03-01 21:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Delivery huh? Sounds alright. I'm never doing one-shots again after this. They are way too hard.

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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-03-05 05:58:43 +0000 UTC]

lolz,ya they have to end so soon to i hate that.

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