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9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 00:30:36 +0000 UTC]
Can't find chapter 3 did you make one?
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shozurei In reply to 9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 00:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Not yet. I'm a little stuck on what's going to happen. I'm trying my best though.
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9TailedNaruSasu In reply to shozurei [2009-07-24 00:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'm sure you'll think of something
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shozurei In reply to 9TailedNaruSasu [2009-07-24 20:06:04 +0000 UTC]
This happens to me on most of my story. I get to a certain point, than- Bam! Can't think of the next part.
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9TailedNaruSasu In reply to shozurei [2009-07-27 02:35:14 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that sucks. I cant wait until you think of the next part!
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TouketsuKaben [2008-08-11 20:00:46 +0000 UTC]
Aw that was cute ^-^ it's nice to have a light-hearted story to read sometimes...
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shozurei In reply to TouketsuKaben [2008-08-11 22:08:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I've got a third of chapter 2 written. I'll write the rest after I finish the chapter to my FMA story.
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TouketsuKaben In reply to shozurei [2008-08-11 23:57:26 +0000 UTC]
cool ^-^ think you could let me know when it's posted or should I just check myself? :3
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shozurei In reply to TouketsuKaben [2008-08-12 11:22:39 +0000 UTC]
I'll let you know. It might take a bit though. My muse tends to have a short attention span. I just have to get them to the next morning.
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shozurei In reply to Katsuya-Danna [2008-07-30 23:42:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to keep them in character as much as possible.
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shozurei In reply to Katsuya-Danna [2008-07-31 00:15:21 +0000 UTC]
Cool. Let me know when it's up.
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harrellgirl [2008-07-30 23:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Cute =3 Very creative
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shozurei In reply to AnimeFan-Artemis [2008-05-22 22:13:06 +0000 UTC]
I've got one more page written. I just need to get them to the next morning.
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emo-wolfhound [2008-02-10 17:56:38 +0000 UTC]
awwww~~ so cute>.<
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-10 18:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Just so you know, the next chapter may take a while. I need to work on my 3 other stories as well. I'm drowning here!
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-17 20:43:10 +0000 UTC]
very i wrote a poem in the middle of the night and most of it didn't even make sence
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-21 02:37:08 +0000 UTC]
wat why?u don't like it or u just vert tried writing a poem?
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-21 22:48:11 +0000 UTC]
I can't write it. I like to read some poems.
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-23 00:44:52 +0000 UTC]
nice i love writing them.hate reading them...idk why.
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-23 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]
That's odd. I need some advice. I'm writing a sasunaru one-shot and I'm having a little trouble. How would I have Sasuke give Naruto a valentine's gift and keep him in character?
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-23 03:04:45 +0000 UTC]
mmmmm wats kind of gift is he gonna give him?cause it depends on the gift mostly
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-23 17:47:52 +0000 UTC]
It's a plush fox with a yellow ribbon tied around its neck, and a chocolate bar. Plus, Sasuke doesn't know how Naruto feels about him.
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-24 16:10:54 +0000 UTC]
ok so how bout this naruto goes around giving gifts to everyone like saskura,shika and then,but doesn't give one to sasu wat does he think about this? i wonder.now later one naruto gives sasu a gift nd if u want he can also confess to him. sound good?or no?
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-24 17:04:28 +0000 UTC]
I don't know. I have Naruto really depressed because he never gets valentine's from anyone. I'm having Sasuke ask Iruka for advice, but I'm not sure what Iruka should say.
P.S. Once I'm done with this, I'm never writing one-shots again! They are way too hard!!
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-02-24 17:52:21 +0000 UTC]
ok so um let me tthink wat would iruka say mmm*thinking*
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ok i think i got it wat if he said something like um u should get him something sweet or errr um ya like some roses or something with some chocolateo' or ya something old sorry idk i really can't think of something iruka would say
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-02-24 22:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I know what Iruka's gonna do. He'll tell Sasuke to just be honest, and hint that Naruto might just like Sasuke back. Now, what is Sasuke gonna do? The best option is to have him give the fox to Naruto straight out, but that just doesn't seem very Sasuke-like.
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-03-01 08:01:07 +0000 UTC]
True maybe someone can have it deliverd for him. Or he can put it at naruto's door ring or knock on the door hide then ya ,but the rest sounds great^^
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shozurei In reply to emo-wolfhound [2008-03-01 21:56:39 +0000 UTC]
Delivery huh? Sounds alright. I'm never doing one-shots again after this. They are way too hard.
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emo-wolfhound In reply to shozurei [2008-03-05 05:58:43 +0000 UTC]
lolz,ya they have to end so soon to i hate that.
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