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Published: 2014-11-29 18:28:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 911; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 3
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Even if there love is distant one day they'll come back togetherwww.youtube.com/watch?v=AfEFWtβ¦
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Well, this was in the critic section so might as well critic it
First off, I love the composition, its amazing so the concept is there! I also love your art style, you have such good eyes! You also got the perspective right which is awesome! Now some things that you can do to make this piece even better. First off is the proportions, the heads are bigger to the rest of their body. Of course with manga and anime it doesn't have to be exactly proportional, but its a little too off. These proportions would be better on chibis. I personally like the heads being that large since they are the main point, so you would probably just have to enlarge their hands and arms. As for the girl, you might want to make her body larger too, on the boy though, his body is fine.Β
For the coloring, I love your style of coloring too, its amazing! I think you could add some more shading and contrast though. Like the back arm of the boy, his shirt sleeve should be much darker. Also the front hand of the girl should be shaded since the boys arm is overlapping it. You could also add some shading by the hair etc. You could even go back and add to the piece right now if you wanted to!
Again, this is a wonderful piece and I hope these tips helped you
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Thank you i'll make sure to improve
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Pretty awesome work you have here, man!
Color-wise, it's solid. You have quite a talent with colored pencils.
My advice is probably to improve on the hands and head a bit more.
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Thank you, and i know i'll keep trying
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Thank you but your art work is betterΒ
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Can you do a favor for me?
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