Comments: 16
PearlChelle [2014-12-17 15:03:47 +0000 UTC]
OMG that is such a cute idea and she looks so pretty!! AWWWWW, thank you so so much!!! ^u^
Lachlan is no fun. xD
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PearlChelle In reply to ShroomHattah [2014-12-18 04:04:03 +0000 UTC]
IT LOOKS PERFECT!! Makes me want to draw Marie again, I never draw her! O:
THANK YOU AGAIN!! c:
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ShroomHattah In reply to PearlChelle [2014-12-18 04:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Would make such a good comic! It would be amazing if you did xD
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PearlChelle In reply to ShroomHattah [2014-12-18 04:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Maybe I will sometime. I would probably make it boring somehow though hah
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serge-fiedos [2014-12-17 08:41:09 +0000 UTC]
You are improving a lot, this one is simply beautiful !
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serge-fiedos In reply to ShroomHattah [2014-12-17 10:56:12 +0000 UTC]
I really dig it ! And happy to give you energy.
I think it's as good as Frank Cho art, and it's what i mean without useless flattery.
Gracefull lines, very well used, and great expression, you're really in the good way.
If i may tell you a little crit, i think that her back and arm are lacking some thicker outlines like on the face or the hair.
It's something i see also in your other works. This combinaison on the face is just perfect, so in my opinion you should keep it on every parts of the body, except if you want to do a fading effect. And in the background if any, the thin lines are good.
Keep up this good work, can't wait to see more like this one !
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serge-fiedos In reply to ShroomHattah [2014-12-17 11:41:12 +0000 UTC]
very good ! Maybe you could modulate a bit between thin and thick, like the hair do when reaching the arm, but it's good like that.
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