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pureart [2007-04-12 03:20:59 +0000 UTC]
I find it beautiful, that is all I can say.
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fAlling-sloWly [2006-02-26 23:57:24 +0000 UTC]
This is a beautiful shot very well done !
Great lighting
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99thbone [2006-01-20 06:33:56 +0000 UTC]
like the framing and the way you posed -- all those angles -- like the idea for the lighting you used -- later days
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jacks-bloodshot-eyes [2006-01-19 22:20:11 +0000 UTC]
i defninitly see ass crack. but thats just me. other than that i like the lighting. ciao
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jacks-bloodshot-eyes In reply to shutterbug13 [2006-01-20 16:51:59 +0000 UTC]
not the baclk one....two sheets? why? just wondering, sorry if im bugging you, just trying to understand
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jacks-bloodshot-eyes In reply to shutterbug13 [2006-01-21 17:47:03 +0000 UTC]
the thingy at the bottom of the picture. in the center. looks like bum. but you say your wearing underwaear. and that its a sheet. im asking why the two sheets?
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TachyonDecay [2006-01-19 21:42:29 +0000 UTC]
I like the way your legs are crossed and your arms are held up to your chest. The part with the chin only so much into the picture irks me. I think maybe having it without the chin, just the neck, might work better; I don't know.
I think the main problem is that your legs jut to far up into the photo and take up too much space. So the upper part of your body looks a bit distant and marginalised. The whole idea of "cover" is interesting, but maybe if the legs were down further it would expose more of the sheet and make the picture more balanced and less about the legs. If you were going for a focus on the legs, I would have your arms wrapped around the legs to sort of draw even more attention to them.
The lighting is nice--it's all soft and fuzzy, and it helps with the contrast between the legs and the sheet, which I think worked really well.
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shutterbug13 In reply to TachyonDecay [2006-01-19 22:22:02 +0000 UTC]
mk i understand waht i mean
makes sence thanks ben
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superstitious13 [2006-01-19 19:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Uhrm, I agree about the chin, I think cut it all out or nothing, you know? I also get trying to cover yourself...but a sweater may have sufficed and got the message across as well. I think I need to be totally one hundred percent honest and I think you need to move on past the shots of the black sheet strategically covering your body. I say that with love. I just think that it's stunted, and if you were going to do a picture with the black sheet involving nudity/coverage it should have been one. Looks like a kind of wannabe series that's not a series. Erm, the lighting works well, I actually like the x-mas lights effect. Uh, I still can't figure out for the life of me what's at the bottom of the picture. At first I thought "...is...is that Meghan's bum crack?"...but then I was like, no...that'd be awkward...fold in the sheet?...no, too light. I just wanna know what it is please. Also the shadow over your leg makes it look like it's cut off and in turn is extremely awkward and makes it look like you have three legs. Actually, I may just be hallucinating. Buuut yep.
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shutterbug13 In reply to superstitious13 [2006-01-19 21:06:55 +0000 UTC]
ok well to be honest i don't really know what to say to your critque, i'm sorry you don't like the photographs, but i do know what u mean about having only one. glad u like the lightng. sorry that u think i have a "wannabee series" but there is only this and the one called blend left in my gallery, one i removed and ivory dissapeard. and this although called cover the focus was supposed to be on the legs and hands. and i thought the black sheet covering would be better than something like a sweater, which i have already done, and if i tangled my legs would risk having my underwear be in the photo. I understand what ur saying, and thank you for the critique.
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if-u-could-only-see [2006-01-19 19:28:35 +0000 UTC]
if that chunk of your chin wasn't showing it would have created, mystery... ahh, how many times have I said mystery in my life. cover? well you're not really that covered, i like your collar bones. they're well defined but it seems as if you are trying to lift your shoulders too high to create that effect. ohwell, nice softness in the lighting.
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shutterbug13 In reply to if-u-could-only-see [2006-01-19 21:08:53 +0000 UTC]
actually my sholders aren't being lifted, but rather collasped inward. but otay. and yeah i know what u mean about the chin.
thanks
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shutterbug13 In reply to Audjo [2006-01-19 21:07:30 +0000 UTC]
yeppers
thanks
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yosemite-13a [2006-01-19 18:15:16 +0000 UTC]
very nice contrast between the "chaos" of your legs and the harmony, sensuality of your hands!!
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