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Published: 2015-04-11 20:08:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 505; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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These guys are Ilari (the cranky healer) and Tafar (the good-natured warrior),, characters owned by Eniell and Ejuba. Both are competing in a deadly 'hunt' organized by the most powerful woman in the world, who will grant a single wish to the winner. Unfortunately for Ilari, he lacks any combat skills, and as a druid, he has vowed never to harm others. Luckily for him, Tafar, a lazy summoner who isn't interested winning the game, has agreed to protect him. Their other teammates are often fed-up with Ilari's abrasive personality and constant lies, but Tafar realizes there must be more to him than meets the eye, and bit by bit, the two grow closer as their quest grows more and more dangerous. 

For more info on these characters, please see the character sheets by Eniell and her RP partner Ejuba.

Tafar: [link]
Ilari: [link]

As making manga is something I haven't really done before, any and all feedback is much appreciated!
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Eniell [2015-04-12 10:19:14 +0000 UTC]

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Shuukaku92 In reply to Eniell [2015-04-13 09:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I still feel like it looks very different from a 'real' manga or doujinshi, but it makes me really happy to hear you think otherwise. And I'm glad to hear I got the dialogue right! This comic is read left to right, but the sky panel is reversed for a better flow....I hope I got the composition to properly guide the reader, I'm not sure

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Eniell In reply to Shuukaku92 [2015-04-14 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]

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Shuukaku92 In reply to Eniell [2015-04-15 18:03:56 +0000 UTC]

 

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