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shyborg â hide n seek 1
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Published: 2007-06-04 21:44:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1287; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 21
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this is the first page of the comic that i drew for the exhibition of babel fest (14 -17 June)pencil,pentel brush pen,cardboard texture for the backround and at the end ps... (A3)
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~ekato-enteka said he was showing at the Babel fest with Giganto Books. That's cool that you were there too.
I like the cardboard texture. It works well with your color scheme. It is so beautiful and grungy, perfect for a rainy fall day in the city. It's like this stained carboard page is something you would find lying in the grass there.
The story progression is neat. The only thing I can't figure out is the bottom panel...the black rectangle?
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thank you very much!
this is the first page of the story and as you can see(if you can, because its littlebit difficult without bubbles) the man with the tractor will kill the young girl, so... because i didn't want to show the murder scene... i draw this black panel in which ,at the final, i put a "splash" and the title of the story with my name!
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Wow, cinematic. I can see. The lack of bubbles doesn't make the story difficult to grasp at all. I thought that perhaps the black spot was the girl getting killed. Ugh. You dealt with it well. No blood or guts, I'm glad! The way you've set the scene makes the story far more intriguing. However, I have a suggestion. You should replace this version with the new version that has the splash panel of your name and title! It would be neat to see.
ps. Your new avator is really cool.
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You're welcome, and thanks for adding me as a friend! Reading your comments and studying your comic book panels will help me in my quest to learn how to make comics. Your artwork is so good and you are nice to comment back to people! Thanks!
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pou einai o wagner?
pou einai o poutsini?
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eisai gia to poutso eisai
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ntaksei katalabainw twra to piksimo p exei pesei..ole k respect gia ta dontia tou trakter.
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pikse pikse mikro mou!
thanks!
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etsiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiii!!!
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pwpw!!
poli wraio pantws..!
kala kai auto to xazo tosi fasaria den tin akouge,..tsk tsk tsk
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an tin eixe akousi ego ti comic tha ekana meta mou les?
e? e?
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axem nai exeis ena dikio...
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That's a cracking good stip!
But the poor girl! *covers eyes*
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d ginete allios..proxoraei tin istoria!
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oraio to proto plano opos sou eipa kai i sxinothesia
alla
mou kleveis ta comic?? to persino mou ekana gia babel kiolas?? tsk tsk
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kouradia sto krevvati sou!
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kouradia? asto dialo sixama!
se klevo se klevo..giati eisai k gamo ta gomenakia!
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haha nai eimai kai skulitsa sto krevvati
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poly oreo.. kai to 2o,... to telos ta spaei!
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thanks!
pou to kseris to telos?
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den xeroa po afto pou eida, to hide and seek ypethesa oti einai to telos mias kai tha htan gamato na teleiosei etsi... me to fandasma na paizei bala...
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oxi oxi... einai telios asxeto... einai 5 selides olo...tha deis!
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to gamhses sto xrwma!
(me th kalh ennoia)
*perhfanos* ΌαλαÎșα λολ
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sto prwto kare...emena eixe hlio
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sto teleuteo emena exei ema! XAXAXA
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