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Published: 2009-04-03 17:05:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1386; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Description "Oh, the angels they grew lonely
they took ya cause they were lonely
now I'm lonely too."

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This is Revision #2 based on excellent feedback and critique from MEGAN-Yrrbby. [link]
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Many thanks to the beautiful model stock which served as inspiration for this deviation


Makayla Angel 10 [link]

The angel statue photo is my own -- from a graveyard in the ninth ward of new orleans (with my iphone hehe). Here are some other images of that statue in my gallery: [link] [link] [link]


I used two textures from night-fate-stock:
[link] [link]

The background is a comp of two images from stock.xchang [link]

Lyric from the song "Sonny Boy" by written by Ray Henderson, Bud De Sylva, and Lew Brown

featured: [link]
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Comments: 26

MeganLeeRetouching [2009-04-03 17:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


The concept of your photomanipulation is wonderful. I love the child resting against the angel stone. I also think the bare trees add to the feeling of it. Over all I really love your work on this piece.

However, I don't care for the texture against the manipulation. It makes it grainy, as if it was a bad quality, and it in my opinion it takes away from the photo.

The lighting when you look at it, it looks like it's coming from the ground not the sky. Maybe if you tried making it narrow at the sky and expand outwards as it's reaching down it would look more like sunlight breaking through clouds. (If that was what you are going for.)

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shyduck In reply to MeganLeeRetouching [2009-04-03 21:55:01 +0000 UTC]

I have posted a revision to this piece, and just so you know - I based it on your feedback and cited you in the artist's notes to be clear that you were reacting to a different version. Thanks so much - I think it's much better now.

I had to overcome some really harsh shadows on the statue that were tough because the resolution was super low to start with, but I think I managed it, and overall, I am much happier with the deviation.

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MeganLeeRetouching In reply to shyduck [2009-04-03 22:58:44 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome. I love it now. It looks way better. I am glad to have helped out.

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shyduck In reply to MeganLeeRetouching [2009-04-03 18:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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MeganLeeRetouching In reply to shyduck [2009-04-03 20:35:43 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome hon.

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SweetlyAddicted [2010-07-18 16:01:32 +0000 UTC]

oh,I know how she feels...
I miss my mother too,she passed on when I was only 11.

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shyduck In reply to SweetlyAddicted [2010-08-06 02:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for posting here. I am so sorry about your loss - it means a lot to me that you shared it here, with me. Many hugs

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SweetlyAddicted In reply to shyduck [2010-08-06 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

your welcome and thanks^^

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TeenagePolitics [2009-05-24 14:43:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the soft feel this picture has..

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shyduck In reply to TeenagePolitics [2009-05-24 16:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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ManipulateThis [2009-05-07 15:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Hi!
Your work has been featured here [link]

~suntanna

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shyduck In reply to ManipulateThis [2009-05-08 01:51:59 +0000 UTC]

That is wonderful - thank you so much!

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ManipulateThis In reply to shyduck [2009-05-08 05:58:37 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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AishaShah [2009-04-22 18:54:02 +0000 UTC]

i'm absolutely speechless.. so calm, so beautiful..

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shyduck In reply to AishaShah [2009-05-15 11:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend

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ShibasRock [2009-04-04 01:44:59 +0000 UTC]

I love the entire concept of the photo.
Very pretty model aswell

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shyduck In reply to ShibasRock [2009-05-15 11:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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wisewitch [2009-04-03 22:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Your model is beautiful, cuz she's my daughter

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shyduck In reply to wisewitch [2009-04-03 22:54:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! She is really beautiful -- it was so great to be able to work with your stock. Let me know what she thinks of the deviation and her new hairstyle

Tell her thank you as well

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ralucs [2009-04-03 20:26:18 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful!!

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shyduck In reply to ralucs [2009-04-03 22:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, dear

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HappyKootie [2009-04-03 18:11:53 +0000 UTC]

nice

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shyduck In reply to HappyKootie [2009-04-03 22:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DarkLaguz [2009-04-03 17:17:53 +0000 UTC]



Yay! This is awesome....

some of the edges (like where the girl meets the statue by her knee, and where the statue meets the ground) could use a little touching up...they seem too hard where the girl is concerned...and too jagged where the statue base is concerned.

Just a suggestion!

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shyduck In reply to DarkLaguz [2009-04-03 22:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you -- I took it into account in my revision / repost.

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DarkLaguz In reply to shyduck [2009-04-04 07:00:45 +0000 UTC]



Glad I could be of help!!

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