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Published: 2012-06-20 12:56:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 34869; Favourites: 609; Downloads: 1896
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Description This is from one of my new series, The Eden Archives. Eden Archives is the place where all the history of this planet is stored and archived in high-tech devices. This section of it is where ancient artifacts was stored and shown.
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Siamon89 In reply to ??? [2012-06-21 11:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique. About the 3d woman model, that's right, I couldn't adjust some of the muscles properly in Poser. I should work more on that you know.

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ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2012-06-20 13:47:01 +0000 UTC]

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I don't know where to start, as far as the people go it looks like they are more imersed in monotony than actual work. This gives the natural feel of a realistic environment that would make a serious Sci-Fi. The almost transL.E.D. lining is a bit more overpowering and obvious than the last picture making it seemed forced. I love the perspective of a distant and yet to be reveiled possibly alien sun as evident by the warm glow of light that comes in whever it can, although as strong as it is it seems to not bother anybody. The natural, real mood of this picture is improved several fold from the last one. As beautiful as the light is the overal focus of the picture is not only misplaced but asymetrical. I will end by saying there should be more layers of shelves, as much as the shelves blend in, there should be more background layers that seem to blend in, overall nicely done in so many ways.

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GabrielAuger [2012-06-20 13:34:01 +0000 UTC]

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Wow ! the arrengement between white and desert (the background) is very great. I like also the bright edges on your coffee table. The Eden Archives make me feel like this planet is very developped in high tech like you said, but I think you miss somethings colorous for the room, like plants, statues or paintings. If I should visit the Eden archives, I expected also to see a tropical environnement with a thought that it's fresh and smooth. So, to reform my critique, your art is very arranged with the theme, but it makes me feel like too much white and maybe add more lights source.

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Siamon89 In reply to GabrielAuger [2012-06-22 01:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique. Yes you are right, the name "Eden" tells so much about the nature or gaia. It's like first thing you picture is a greenland when you hear that name, and scenes could be developed that way.

It really lacks a metaphore, maybe with a few tree or plant statues -within the same color composition- , these would be really a good point to catch the subject to be honest.

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GabrielAuger In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-22 11:50:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah, that's true I thought that when I saw the name, but it's just the daily nature that influence my opinion about it.

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CaitlanEve [2017-09-30 02:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Might I use this for the video trailer of my novel? I would give you credit in the video of course

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MrZombieBusicit [2016-05-06 12:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!

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P0MG [2015-03-12 02:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Very real like!

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Tygahman [2012-08-27 17:10:45 +0000 UTC]

I love this style.

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space-commander [2012-08-07 01:42:59 +0000 UTC]

great shadowing!

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Siamon89 In reply to space-commander [2012-08-11 17:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks (=

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MiikeDV [2012-08-01 02:18:38 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous!

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zeitschiff [2012-07-17 03:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Superb work. Superb series.

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GMarz [2012-07-09 06:40:53 +0000 UTC]

incredibly cool design

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Trip-Like-I-Do [2012-06-26 04:17:31 +0000 UTC]

iWorld!

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Siamon89 In reply to Trip-Like-I-Do [2012-06-26 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]

(=

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Trip-Like-I-Do In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-26 15:00:34 +0000 UTC]

S iMon

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Siamon89 In reply to Trip-Like-I-Do [2012-06-26 21:03:38 +0000 UTC]

iMonster

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Trip-Like-I-Do In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-26 21:08:09 +0000 UTC]

oh iBet

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Siamon89 In reply to Trip-Like-I-Do [2012-06-27 01:54:15 +0000 UTC]

trip like you do

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Trip-Like-I-Do In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-27 02:05:22 +0000 UTC]

i know, i know, i'm a trip

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Siamon89 In reply to Trip-Like-I-Do [2012-06-27 02:12:00 +0000 UTC]

L ucy in the S ky with D iamonds (=

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CrueKnight [2012-06-22 22:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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karanua [2012-06-22 14:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me very much of the conceptual artwork done by such masters as Syd Mead and the late great Ralph McQuarrie. A round of self congratulation is in order I should say. Very well done

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Siamon89 In reply to karanua [2012-06-22 18:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much indeed. Those artists made this kind of things with paper and pencils, so a big round of applause to them indeed (=.

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AuroraChair [2012-06-21 20:24:18 +0000 UTC]

cyberprep.
positive futuristic and clean sci-fi.
fantastic!

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Siamon89 In reply to AuroraChair [2012-06-22 18:09:19 +0000 UTC]

(=

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wodansring [2012-06-21 10:10:26 +0000 UTC]

absoluely stunning. yes, i'd like to know what renderer you used....

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wolvesbreath [2012-06-21 09:01:44 +0000 UTC]

I actually like the way the room not only seems to be livable, whilst it is a museum of sorts it seems to have the feel of a place more like a home, welcoming you to stop awhile and just hang out. But I also like the contrast of the livable and welcoming interior with the desert exterior it seems to emphasis a feeling of safe haven.
Hell what I wouldn't give for a lounge room like this, and the lass in the white top

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Siamon89 In reply to wolvesbreath [2012-06-22 22:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could stay on staff compound. You know 4 or 6 bed rooms where staff live in. It wouldn't be that luxurious but It's something to start with (=.

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wolvesbreath In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-22 23:07:14 +0000 UTC]

sounds good to me when can I move in

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Lance66 [2012-06-21 02:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Superb work, so clean and professional, brilliant stuff.Wicked artwork.

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rmj7 [2012-06-20 21:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's just sexy nasty. . . um, that's a compliment, btw >.>

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kokolores123 [2012-06-20 21:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! What renderer is that?

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Siamon89 In reply to kokolores123 [2012-06-22 18:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's Mental Ray.

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Sparksman [2012-06-20 20:10:38 +0000 UTC]

ah, another cool one!
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Siamon89 In reply to Sparksman [2012-06-22 18:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Sparksman (=.

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InstantsFiges [2012-06-20 19:47:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry but .........fucking awesome !!!!!

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Siamon89 In reply to InstantsFiges [2012-06-22 18:18:08 +0000 UTC]

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DaftCherub [2012-06-20 19:31:11 +0000 UTC]

This is truly awesome man

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xSakuraKurox [2012-06-20 19:00:15 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful...

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Arte-Animada [2012-06-20 18:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Heyy !!...your art is amazing !!Loved the colors and design !!!

Please Check my gallery too !

Cheers !!!

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electricpalette [2012-06-20 18:03:58 +0000 UTC]

nice. i particularly like the tables. what are you using?

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7masterfang7 [2012-06-20 17:44:47 +0000 UTC]

what program did you use to make this? it looks amazing.

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Siamon89 In reply to 7masterfang7 [2012-06-22 18:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. 3ds Max + Mental Ray + PS + AE + Optical Flares.

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RengokuAkashi [2012-06-20 16:53:01 +0000 UTC]

This sort of reminds me of an anime I'm watching.... But this doesn't look like a distopia..... I think?

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Siamon89 In reply to RengokuAkashi [2012-06-22 18:13:51 +0000 UTC]

It's certainly not distopic. Not utopic either, a neutral mood in the future. But closer to utopic than distopic.

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RengokuAkashi In reply to Siamon89 [2012-06-22 18:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay! Thanks!

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GerDexter [2012-06-20 15:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Perfect! Again!

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Siamon89 In reply to GerDexter [2012-06-22 18:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man (=.

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