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PaperRabbits [2019-08-10 15:44:09 +0000 UTC]
I really love this piece! The only thing I'd suggest is working on side profiles, and maybe as a bit of a tint to the water reflections (at first i thought her feet were huge round bits because I thought it was just water refracting the legs and making them not connected to her in appearance, not a reflection)
I love the atmosphere you create in your pieces. Simple, everyday moments.
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Sibihxe In reply to PaperRabbits [2019-08-10 16:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the tips! I should have connected the reflection now that you mention it (;一_一)
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PaperRabbits In reply to Sibihxe [2019-08-11 02:40:51 +0000 UTC]
honestly i like the slight disconnect, like the waters warping it. The water just needs a bit of tint, i think.
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Sibihxe In reply to PaperRabbits [2019-08-11 13:29:34 +0000 UTC]
Like a little more blue ish or ourple?
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PaperRabbits In reply to Sibihxe [2019-08-11 21:44:59 +0000 UTC]
bluish- maybe a bit teal? since thats the color of a chlorinated pool.
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Sibihxe In reply to Sibihxe [2019-08-11 13:29:40 +0000 UTC]
*purple
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Kami-Anna [2019-08-08 20:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Hey, here from ProjectComment
I love your fizzy, soft and peacefull artstyle. This place looks so nice and relaxing; a pool far above the ground in the clouds (at least that's what it seems like to me). The anatomy looks realy good (the heads look a bit stretched up but that's just nitpicking). The wave in the water is great and gives it more of a water than a mirror feel to it. On emore nitpicky thing is that were the legs are reflected in the water (I might be wrong, I have not looked at refrences but) Ithink the offset of the reflection is good but her legs should go all the way to the surface, right now there just stopping in mid air.
I've looked through your galery and your art is already soo amazing, baeutiful and creative (I love the waiting for the bus and harmony). I think the "easiest" way you could improve your art is try out extremer poses/perspectives and/or playing around with lightsources/effects.
I hope I could help
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Sibihxe In reply to Kami-Anna [2019-08-08 23:52:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! By the legs in the reflection do you mean there shouldn't be a separation there? Sorry, a bit confused Also I think experimenting with more extreme concepts would do me good - thanks for the tips!
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Kami-Anna In reply to Sibihxe [2019-08-09 09:10:16 +0000 UTC]
yes that's what I meant (just like there is no seperation where the ladder ouches the water)
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Sibihxe In reply to Kami-Anna [2019-08-09 19:03:05 +0000 UTC]
ok thanks!
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