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Published: 2016-04-16 15:09:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 814; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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A commission forΒ Lallala LalallahhPersonally, I like this and think its one of my best. What do you think? Please can you comment on here and tell me what needs improving or just comment for no reason Β Β
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PLEASE DO NOT USE MY ARTWORK IN ANYWAY, THIS INCLUDES TRACING, RE-UPLOADING, HIGHLY REFERENCING OR CLAIMING AS YOUR OWN
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This is really well done! I would recommend making the forearms a bit longer, and the front of a dogs paw is slanted away from the arm (I'm bad at describing things so if you don't understand what I just said then look up "wolf paw how to draw")
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Also, if you observe dogs laying down you'll notice that they usually have their legs to one side. you can look up "wolf laying down" or "dog laying down"
I really like how you did the spiked collar and antlers.
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Really? I was told to do the collar a bit differently but I agree with you that it looks okay the way it is.Β
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That looks amazing!! My only critique I would say is to try and make the shading more directed to one area, where light shines on one angle and shadows fall on the opposite angle, instead of having shading and lighting right next to each other.
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Okay thanks!Β
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It looks nice, but three things made me wonder how the heck it works
1. Thick eyelashes: use a thinner brush?
2. Don't make the spike longer according to the fur- make it smaller and push in on the fur
3. Fur patterns with a thinner brush?
but all in all it's fine owo
I critique too much rip
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No its fine, I appreciate your advice.Β
I'll try that next time, but I have a question. When you say Push it on the fur, how do you mean? Have you got any examples?
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Here:Β sta.sh/0xf2uroiz59
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Thank you, I'll be sure to use it
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No problem!! ovo
and thanks for not being a butthurt kid when I critique XD
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Nah, I am looking to improve and the only way I can do that is to listen to people
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This is really very nice, the shading is well done, the items look well drawn, and the bust of the wolf really draws the eye. The style is very well executed as well. As for improvement, I'd recommend maybe making the front legs a little longer?
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Yes, I always find legs quite difficult. Thank you for the advice, I'll practice a bit more over the up coming days. And also thank you for commenting 
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