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Published: 2013-12-27 03:41:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3543; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 81
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Time to end and start the New Year with Applejack relaxing on a 2014 Chevrolet Corvette Stingray.It has been a while since I made a pinup car artwork and I canβt wait to make more for in 2014. The Corvette was really fun to draw since it has smooth body lines that flow throughout the car. I have been seeing these cars roaming around my area and I was able to take a closer look in detail of one at the San Francisco Auto Show. The Corvette looks like an amazing car and I hope I can get behind the wheel of one day.Β
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Awesome job with everything! The C7 and Applejack both look perfect! 
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Hey, do you take constructive criticism? I'm an artist too, and I just wanted to ask you if you'd like me to write you a critique. I'm asking coz I don't wanna offend you after all.
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Thanks for asking. I am also an art student, so I wouldn't mind some constructive critique. That's why I post my artwork to see what other people see and what I don't see. There are (a lot) flaws I left in this piece (due to rushing), so I don't mind what you can find.lolΒ
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No, you misunderstood! I'm actually an amateur internet artist, but I've watched plenty of animated works, practice on my character anatomy often and hang around my best friend who used to be a professional animator and still does animation.
So here's your review:
Positive things: I really love the grass and the car. They're so detailed with so much color and shading and sheen effects. The whole Applejack pinup thing is very erotic as an idea. I also adore how you did the reflection of AJ's body on the hood, the subtle visual effect of her mane and tail slide down that hood and the sexy waist and abdominals.
Negative things: You got parts of your anatomy wrong. One is that your arms are a little too short. Your forearms in particular are supposed to start thick at the base and then thin out towards the wrist. Yours kinda look like rolling pins.
Here's a link to a good example of forearms (it's an anthro AJ one):
metalfoxxx.deviantart.com/art/β¦
I think all of the anatomy is done really good in this example!
Another thing is your legs. I don't know which is the thigh, which is the hip, which is the calf here. It just looks weird. And the legs seem way too large when they're connected to such a tiny pelvis. The connection just doesn't work. What you need is a thick thigh that goes down from the buttocks, each one right next to the clitoral area, narrows down at the knee cap, then comes the calf which is very much like the forearm when you draw it, only it ends with a big hoof at the end instead of a human foot.
Example for legs:
metalfoxxx.deviantart.com/art/β¦
And if you have to practice on her hat. The positioning of the accesory on AJ's head is fine but the crown is kinda big and oval.
Here's an exact vector of her hat:
fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201β¦
As a farewell, if you want some of my works as an example, just check out my gallery. 
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Thank you so much on your input, I appreciate it.Β
I have been drawing cars a lot longer than I have been drawing anthro's, so those are really good tips and I will definitively focus on them on my future works. This is my first time drawing a laid back pose from a birds eye view and I was struggling on her forearm, her legs, and body length.Β
I look forward to seeing more of your critiques in the future when you get the chance.
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Well... all you have to do is ask! Contact me if you need me.
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Sweet Apple Acres' new advertising campaign.
To truly cover their bases, they've got one with Big Mac as well.
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Wasn't he the one out mudding in a Silverado?
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