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oWArtemis [2011-12-30 12:08:34 +0000 UTC]

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So. I apologise if I seem a bit harsh. But Gauche is one of my favourite characters in Tegami Bachi xD.
SO, here I go.

First of, his chin is pointy. I'm not sure if his chin is actually like that, but most guys have flatter ones.
Next, his eyebrows look a bit odd. Maybe you should make them slowly become thicker, not just suddenly add a blob at the end.
Lastly, Isn't his supposed to be white? Your shading seems to be a bit to dark for that. But that's just a matter of opinion.

Anyways, you caught his expression perfectly, and this artwork is awesome, and, *cough* I LOVE YOU GAUCHE!!!.
Keep it up!

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SteepedInMusic [2012-03-07 18:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow ! Amazing work ! I love his eyes...

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