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portaljumper339 [2012-09-04 16:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Critics Note: Anything said about the character design is directed at the deviant that made the OC, not at you.

Vision: As always, I do enjoy seeing people vector/draw/paint/scrawl on a wall with a charcoal briquette other people's OCs, and this is no exception.

Origniality: From the outset, I can see that this is one insanely radical dude, and judging by the name a bit of a folk hero. He definitely would stick out in a crowd, but mainly because of the sheer amounts of badassery he exudes, and it is good that he can stick out without needing bat wings or a broken horn or a bunch of little issues to angst over.

Technique: The same high quality vector art that I've come to expect of you, but I do have one little problem. His smile just seems too... wide. That combined with his eyes and posturing make it look like he's about to eat someone's child instead of rescuing them. I would definitely make the smile smaller for the sake of everyone's sanity.

Impact: A good character that sticks out for the right reasons, but that smile is what I keep coming back to, and it is really starting to creep me out. I would have rated higher if not for that one negative thing that I just can't tear my eyes off of.

Overall: A great gift for a friend, and I'm sure he enjoyed it, but you should definitely downplay the slasher smile. Feel free to comment with any questions.

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Scrooples [2012-09-05 04:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! A great author is deserving of great work!

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