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I've been working on this for a while now, mostly on Celestia and Luna (if you can't tell ^_^) and I'm wanting some feedback. Mostly about Twilight's pose but please, comment on anything you see off.Note: Cutie Marks aren't in yet. They'll probably be added last.
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I love it! Can't wait to see the finished version >.<
I checked for imperfections (Which there are none of- luckily) But Luna's left front most hoof seems a little too curvy? Like it shouldn't be so round at the end or something... Don't want to be rude though! ^.^' Just trying to help.
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Critiques are never rude! Thank you, you're too kind (there are plenty of imperfections in there, by the way. I know. I put them there, lol)
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ahahahaa, well, I've been brought up to know that there is always room for improvement! Learn from your mistakes I guess :3 There aren't as many problems as you think, lots of people tend to degrade themselves, or think of themselves as worse than they actually are! Be it in looks, weight, ARTISTIC SKILLS! *wink* *wink* (you see where I'm getting?) You're fine 
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I'm not really degrading myself. I recognize my mistakes and aim to improve on them (by the same token, I try to recognize my strengths). Aim for perfection but be happy with the imperfect reality.
Thank you again!
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YES IT IS. BUT THANK YOU ANYWAY!
...why are we yelling?
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IDONNO!! BUT I LOVE THIS PICTURE!
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I like how the two princesses form a sort of yin yang around an element of harmony. As that's basically what the symbol represents. What Kein may be referring to is Celestia's back leg. It the knee joint needs to be tucked into the body more. But don't take my word for it, needless to say the picture will turn out beautiful
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Oh, I see now. This is why I ask for help. I can't see the flaws after working on it for so long.
And thank you!
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*laughs* Believe me I know how it is.
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Are you aiming for realistic style or..? The head for seems to be cartoony and show-wise, but body shape is quite close to realistic one. Hmm... Twilight looks fine, Celestia and Luna's proportions bothers me,especially flank and hindlegs.
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I'm aiming for somewhere in between, actually. I can see where Luna's back end is off (I don't know why I made her twist like that), but Celestia's? How so?
Thank you!
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The flank and overall body size (and shape) seems to be quite big compare to their head and necks, but especially backlegs. For some reason they feels "wrong" but I can't explain why, I'm no artist and know nothing about pony anatomy.
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