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EDLima3 [2016-04-18 23:04:40 +0000 UTC]
This chapter was EXCELLENT! It's incredible how well you're managing to balance both the action and the story so that the audience never gets too much or too little of either. I'm seriously amazed at how you keep bringing fresh things to the table in each chapter. I wasn't expecting Jay and Tori to have such a nice first conversation and you handled the dialogue real well. Props to you for another stellar chapter, bro.
KEEP EM COMING!
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silrance In reply to EDLima3 [2016-04-19 16:28:29 +0000 UTC]
hahah thanks so much, bro! im really glad you enjoyed this chapter! and mannnn im so glad u liked the convo between Jay and Tori! i tried to make it funny yet, smooth, you know?
btw did u see your character in this chapter? I drew him hahah
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EDLima3 In reply to silrance [2016-04-20 13:45:08 +0000 UTC]
You truly deserve it, man. And YES!! I SAW MY MAN VIRGIL!! Gotta say, he looks mad sexy in your style. And you made the Jacket look good too. Thanks Bro!
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silrance In reply to EDLima3 [2016-04-21 17:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks, bro! and no pressure! im glad u spotted him and liked it!
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MemorialComics [2016-04-13 20:50:39 +0000 UTC]
ohh yeah they are back
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NeoTetsaiga [2015-12-24 13:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Nice work. I really dig the expressions.
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Hookomics [2015-12-24 08:40:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh man...just read chapters 4 and 5. They went pretty hard on Jays sister. Brutal payback is needed. Don't pull any punches man. Keep it raw!
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silrance In reply to Hookomics [2015-12-24 13:06:33 +0000 UTC]
Hahah lol thanks bro! and of course! i won't hold back!
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