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Published: 2010-06-10 05:07:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2347; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 37
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Description One dark and stormy night,
a fledgling fell from flight,
into a falconer's arms-
Though dead it seemed to be,
the falconer could not see,
any wound to cause such harms-

The falconer bound it 'round,
and laid it on the ground,
then went and built a funeral pyre-
With the bandaged bird within,
soon the flames began to spin,
tangle up and then grow higher-

From there a phoenix bold,
rose up of flame and gold,
twisting about within the air-
Still bound it hung above,
and sang of pain and love,
of magic power both dark and fair-

I am life's flame!
Respect my name!
My fire is red my heart is gold-
Thy dreams can be!
Believe in me!
If you but let my wings unfold!

Up spoke the falconer's fear,
"There may be danger here,
I cannot let this raptor free-
Its words I cannot trust,
it burns with power's lust,
and so in turn it could burn me-"

The falconer then moved fast,
and iron shackles cast,
thus catching up the bird in chain-
"Thy fear has boded ill,
and bound me 'gainst my will,
now I must die and rise again-"

I am life's flame!
Respect my name!
My fire is red my heart is gold-
Thy dreams can be!
Believe in me!
If you but let my wings unfold!

The phoenix burned so bright,
it burst upon the night,
it's golden breast did flame and flare-
One flash of fire and then,
came stormy night again,
and found the falconer holding air!

The magic never dies,
in children's hearts it lies,
pray let them learn from times before-
From dragon's flame and ire,
can come forth phoenix fire,
and we will hear the song once more-

I am life's flame!
Respect my name!
My fire is red my heart is gold-
Thy dreams can be!
Believe in me!
If you but let my wings unfold!
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Comments: 18

GumdropGear [2010-06-11 00:15:29 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. The phoenix means a great deal to me. It is also my fraternities symbol.

love this ^_^

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to GumdropGear [2010-06-11 03:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TenderlySharp [2010-06-10 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]

The phoenix is a powerful muse.

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to TenderlySharp [2010-06-10 20:07:28 +0000 UTC]

That it is.

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Chraelix [2010-06-10 14:57:00 +0000 UTC]

*flails* Firefirefirefirefireyay

All fire-related spazzing aside, this looks excellent - it really looks like the phoenix is both coming out of the fire and is on fire. The poem added a cool effect too.

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to Chraelix [2010-06-10 15:00:48 +0000 UTC]

*giggles* Fire good.

The poem is actually a song called 'Life's Flame' by Heather Alexander. One of my favorites.

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Chraelix In reply to SilverGryphon8 [2010-06-10 15:08:13 +0000 UTC]

yay flamethrower

I love it when song lyrics can apply to stuff like this.
I've actually got one pic that I need to scan in that I drew after listening to Coldplay's "Lost!"... aiyaah, so much scanning to do ><

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DryBonesReborn [2010-06-10 13:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Playing with layers? Looks nice for the translucent effect.

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to DryBonesReborn [2010-06-10 14:46:46 +0000 UTC]

I can't find layer controls on Corel >_< This was done by playing with brush opacity.

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DryBonesReborn In reply to SilverGryphon8 [2010-06-10 15:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Well it looks well done.

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to DryBonesReborn [2010-06-10 15:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Aliora [2010-06-10 12:34:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It looks like it's actually on fire!

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to Aliora [2010-06-10 14:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I rather like it.

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Lieju [2010-06-10 08:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to Lieju [2010-06-10 14:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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UnoSombrero [2010-06-10 05:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice feathery effects-- kinda looks like a tissue paper collage or something.

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LukesSecondCousin In reply to UnoSombrero [2010-06-11 12:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Yah, it looks really cool :- D

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SilverGryphon8 In reply to UnoSombrero [2010-06-10 05:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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