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Venator-Somniorum [2005-04-08 01:24:04 +0000 UTC]

realély nice, I can't wait to see the whole story (-:

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LadyMuse [2005-04-04 04:16:27 +0000 UTC]

The action just flows so well....

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Jordith [2005-01-21 00:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Finally!

Good choice of text box to use for the narration. Personally I might stick in a bit of a haze effect on the jewellry to make it look shiny, otherwise it doesn't look like it's made out of something that would shatter like it does later on plus, considering the style you've chosen to colour it with, it would make it stand out a little more. Just a thought, it's not really neccessary, but it might be something worth tinkering with just to see if you like it.

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avator [2005-01-20 16:47:49 +0000 UTC]

that's very well done too : )

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j-riddler [2005-01-20 06:18:05 +0000 UTC]

*squee* Colour!! O_O Very good!! And that is one pretty necklace! ...Great, now *I* wanna get it, too! Even though I'd never wear it. -_-

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tom-turbo [2005-01-20 04:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, mysterious, what is that necklaxe for? Is it powerful, or what? Must find out! (I think it would me more dramatic if it was a baby he stole, just saying) Coloring is fine!

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