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Published: 2011-09-15 01:01:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 685; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 18
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This is Grace, my new Lucario character.Name: Grace
Species: Lucario
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Grace is a spirit Lucario who lives in the cloud kingdom located in the Sky Dimension. She is very young, only just having evolved. Every spirit Lucario has golden rings asinged to them that keep their form together at birth. Each spirit Lucario is also born with unhealable wounds, which are covered up by the rings. Foolishly, Grace has already broken two of her rings, opening up the wounds forever. Each night, she must apply protective magical bandages. These bandages are not permanent like the rings, but are modertly effective. If all of her rings are destroyed, Grace will die.
Grace also has the power to take control of another Pokemon's element (type). With age, they are able to absorb more and more elements. At age 12, they get one, Flying type.
That's all I have so far~
Detailed background is detailed.
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Comments: 61
No need 2 thank me I really liked it. But y did she remove the rings?
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Well, I always thank people for comments, it's a nice thing to do. Well, she herself can't remove them, but they were knocked off by someone else, or she was attacked. I haven't quite figured this part out yet.
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and why are they born with those wounds?
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It's to make them mortal. Spirit Lucarios live forever if their rings are kept on. I didn't want an entire race of immortal spirit Pokemon, because that seems a little unfair to the rest of my characters.
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yes it seems kind of unfair for them
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Yeah. The only immortal character I have are gods, and that should make sense.
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Wow you are really into gods and angels aren't you?
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Well, not all of my worlds have gods. So, really, I only create them if they fit.
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kk, I was just asking, sorry if I ofended you in any way
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Oh no, you didn't at all.
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Well i'm glad I didn't cause you seem like a real nice person
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Why thank you~ It's very hard to offend me.
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That's nice to hear
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Really interesting. I really like the fact of the rings. ^^
And, the drawing is great. 
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You're very welcome. ^^
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It's a little hard to judge on OC pokemon because it's common not to stick to the anatomy because you are not going for a normal one. The tail looks a little long, but that can be because of your style, so I can't comment on that. The bandage should be a little bit tighter on her tail wound, unless her tail bone and hair is really thick! The feet need a little bit of tuning up. You did make like canine's feet (digitgrade), but you need to bring out the heel a bit, because it looks a bit like it goes from tiny foot to kneecap. The paw on he foreground is alright because of the angle, but the one furthest away really needs some heel. Like the other person said, her other arm should partially be in view because the species has such narrow shoulders. Her other ear as well. I was going to say the background is a little too soft, but I didn't read the cloud part XD. The plants on the pillars in the foreground could be a little more sharp, since they are nearer. The tree should be a little sharper too, since it's not a fluffy cloud. Hope this helps :'D? It's hard to critique, I'm not good at explaining XD.
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Thank you very very VERY much for the critique! You have no idea how much this helps me~
Well, that is one of her features, which a changed for a weakness. Her tail is so large and fluffy, it always gets snagged on things.
Yeah, you're right on the bandages. I do need to work on drawing those. Hopefully I'll get better at that.
Alright, I'll work on that.
For some reason, I never realize those things until it's too late to change them.
You're right about that as well, I just kind of added the vines as a touch, so I kind of did rush them.
Once again! Thank you!
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your very welcome (and yet i have finally achieved 120 dungeoneering on my level 102
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You didn't draw her other arm, unless she lost it.
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Thank you! I'm glad you did!
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Sure! You're welcome! ^^
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Thank you!
Yus! I haven't finalized it yet, but hopefully soon...
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hooray!
and youre welcome!!
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FFFFFFF I wish i didnt have to leave.
You wants to talk?
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It's fine.
Sure, why not?
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FFFFFFFFF I DIDNT WANTS TO MISS IT
So how was your day?
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