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Published: 2012-05-12 05:13:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 12784; Favourites: 124; Downloads: 45
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"And this...is for everything else"Notice how Astrid never finishes her little phrase before she kisses Hiccup. Well, here is where she says it.
I seem to have fallen in love with How to Train Your Dragon, and I am not upset about that whatsoever! ITS SUCH A GOOD MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love these two too, with Astrid being a total hard-ass about everything and Hiccup too embarrassed to tell her anything. And Toothless, of course! He's not in this one, but you can be sure that he'll be in some other fan art.My computer is back in business! After having to be completely reset because of a virus, I finally re installed my software for my painting program and tablet, and I'm back drawing stuff!!!!
IT'S BEEN A GOOD DAY TODAY!Enjoy the fluff above. The moon is coming through a window up above there somewhere. Too lazy to actually draw it...I think it works better without it, somehow.
so much love!
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Very sweet.
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No, this is actually a pretty old piece haha.
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oh, sorry. XP It's still great! They need to put dates on when deviations were uploaded.
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Yeah, I was pretty stupid. I actually found that a few minutes after I replied there.Β Β Β
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It's okay
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Thank you so much! Glad you like
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Thanks so much! and thanks for the fav too!
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Aoh, this is such a sweet little moment.
Lovely.
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Thank you so much
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This picture is so breathtakingly awesome!!!! I love how you've filled the gap in that lil' sentence Astrid says! 
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My God if I smile any bigger my ears will fall off! Thank you so much for the comment!!!!!!!
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE AWESOME!!!!!!! I'm planning on doing some fan art of those too, but this was the first thing that came to mind when I thought of HTTYD
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hey i'm working on a AU fanfic of this story-->[link] and i was wondering if you have any tips, tricks, or other crazy cool ideas.
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hmmm....well if you wanted to continue, i could see some very intense cutting-it-close drama/action trying to save (and eventually saving) astrid. check this [link] i actually wrote a strikingly similar story to this situation, only my character ejected out of a burning plane instead. the chapters after that are full of the drama too. i don't really like the idea of it being hiccup's dream, honestly, it seems too cliche. i personally like something heart-poundingly intense where you dont know if someone will actually live or die.
plus, at the end of said idea you could end it with a scene like "for everything else" something cutesy and romantic that will melt someones socks off. I actually really like what the author did with this prompt, but as previously stated, a dream would be too cliche. make it real. make the reader feel something! thats the goal when I write things. feel free to browse my other stories if you need more inspiration; 99% of them have either romance, awkward relationships or intense drama like above.
wow that was long...
so, in a nutshell:
~keep going with what the author wrote. dont go back and tell the reader "oh this actually didnt happen"
~make it intense, imagine what the reader would feel reading this. make them gasp or break their heart or cry with joy. just make them feel something!
~incorporate the senses! i know when im terrified there are certain things i feel, and hiccup is more than terrified in this situation.
~work on getting rid of words like "is" "and" "but" "there" "was" etc. use bigger, bolder words to force the reader to read slower and enjoy what you wrote, but dont be too complex that they need a dictionary when they read it (instead of saying 'hiccup cried' say 'a sob caught in his throat, and as he bowed his head in sorrow his heart shattered, and the tears came, running down his cheeks in endless rivulets" or something
WOW I WROTE YOU AN ESSAY hope that helps
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Yeah i have saved astrid already (thx OC) and i would like some help after that
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outline for me what you have so far. astrid falls, then what?
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You are 
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Awww, I saw this movie too, but I thought the Vikings would obliterate the dragons :c (I think I have been playing Skyrim a little too much.)
Glad to hear your computer's back up!
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haha yeah maybe
thanks!
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