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Published: 2013-02-14 05:49:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description You're an ugly creature
No one loves,
With broken dreams
And fantasies.

Clinging to the past
That will never come back.
How can you ever hope
To make it in this world?

You need to grow up!
You need to live,
In order to die.

You say; "This is it."
You fool yourself.

If really faced with it,
You'd be afraid!
It isn't what you want,
But you don't know what else to crave.

What makes you think,
"I am special."

I look at you and despise you.

You are as nothing
before the world.
Cold and alone,
Wishing for love.

You put no effort in.

How can you say,
"This is the best I can do."
When that's nothing but a lie?!

You are disgusting.

Fearful of the wind,
They call change.
You can't go outside your own heart anymore.

The songs lose meaning,
The games, not fun.
You look for comfort,
And find rejection from yourself.

You'll never change.

You're an ugly creature
No one loves,
With broken dreams
And fantasies.
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Comments: 6

Stellatrix13 [2017-02-05 21:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Can we talk about how far you've come from this? Β You're such an amazing, loving, fun human being and I'm so glad to have met you and be able to call you a friend.
(Also the poem itself is very well done, a mature expression of these emotions.)

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SilverSugar In reply to Stellatrix13 [2017-02-05 22:14:21 +0000 UTC]

*stammers* I can't believe you're reading these...

T-thank you...

*gulps*

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lagenerala [2013-02-27 02:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. that was. like some verse from a Terror?videogame.. or a Terror movie to.

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SilverSugar In reply to lagenerala [2013-02-27 03:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Hm, thank you for the comment, but unfortunately I am unfamiliar with your comparison.

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lagenerala In reply to SilverSugar [2013-02-27 03:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Well sometimes in Terror movies or Games like Eternal Darkness, there are some verses that kind of represent youΒ΄re gonna face monsters and curses... stuff like that

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SilverSugar In reply to lagenerala [2013-02-27 06:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay, that's a very interesting take. I suppose what this is, is a kind of curse. A curse of fate or will. Yes, I like that very much. It's dark.

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