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SimplySilent β€” Soaring Hopes

#blue #bright #kite #landscape #ocean #sea #seascape #sky #water
Published: 2013-09-21 05:35:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 5540; Favourites: 400; Downloads: 56
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Description CSS is my true love, but it feels nice to try out some digital painting again. Experimenting with clouds and sky this time.

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Comments: 127

SimplySilent In reply to ??? [2013-10-02 23:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely critique!

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IridescentCatalyst In reply to SimplySilent [2013-10-02 23:24:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I was just trying to explain how awesome that piece was, even though I don't know much about the category (digital). I'm glad you approve! Have a nice day!

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SimplySilent In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-10-02 23:30:41 +0000 UTC]

You too!

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IridescentCatalyst In reply to SimplySilent [2013-10-02 23:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, sure.

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FTSArts [2013-09-21 06:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


It is hard for me to write a critique, because I love the work you do so much! But, you asked, so here it goes!

I would first like to say, that I really appreciate the style you painted this with, It really is lovely - the blue is just striking! Maybe a bit much with all the white, but we will get to that...

You say you are experimenting with the sky and clouds, and it would be far too unfair to critique you on what I "think" a cloud should look like, as I feel clouds have always been this interpretive element to art. That being said the style that you used, worked well for your theme. I would suggest you try adding in slight yellow hues to shaded areas of the clouds, just to break up the harsh white against the vibrant blue.

The reflection is very calm, as in no ripples in the water, you could add one or two here or there just by selecting certain areas of the water and distorting them and then adding darker blue for the ripple edges.

The only thing I see as "slightly off" in this, is the horizon. Maybe just a very thin shimmering line to separate water from sky...Then again, that is my personal opinion.

I still really love this, you have achieved a very calm but bright emotion that lets the viewer just sit back and feel relaxed, very much like day-dreaming or having "Soaring Hopes" and that to me is beautiful art.

So a job very well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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SimplySilent In reply to FTSArts [2013-09-21 19:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I tried adding in some yellow hues to the clouds, but it ended up looking pretty bad so I took them out of this one. Adding some more colors to the clouds is something that I'm going to work on more in future artworks.


Lol, ripples were also something I tried and failed at in this one as well. I just duplicated and flipped the layer for the clouds, but I'm thinking that distorting the clouds and maybe blurring them out a little might help make the reflection look more realistic.


And ahh, I see what you mean with the horizon. I think separating it as you said would make it look better.


Thank you so much for the helpful critique! I'll keep your words in mind for my next artworks~

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FTSArts In reply to SimplySilent [2013-09-22 02:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Right on!Β Β 

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ad-referendum [2017-03-05 07:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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Laugh-Butts [2016-11-09 03:24:59 +0000 UTC]

HOW BEAUTIFULΒ 

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Nerderella-bookie [2016-07-10 22:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Its so pretty! Reminds me of the tokyo ghoul opening.

But the clouds are really smushed together and Β a lot of white lines from the clouds, i also cant tell if the bottom is supposed to be water so maybe more of a reflection kinda look and a thin line to separate it but it is beautiful!! I wish i could do this

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Ghostmask101 [2016-02-07 12:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Just simply astonishing!
I love it.....
;v;
It's artists like you who I strive to be likeΒ  Β 

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GabrielGuyer [2014-08-02 05:35:55 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful piece Love the texture and surrounding feel of the clouds in contrast to the simple figure. Really nice work!

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SimplySilent In reply to GabrielGuyer [2014-08-02 19:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you very much!

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Laugh-Butts [2014-07-21 01:59:16 +0000 UTC]

;~; This is so beautiful. Simply unquestionably beautiful. OHHOHOHOHO

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Jenny42 [2014-07-10 21:36:06 +0000 UTC]

brilliant!

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SimplySilent In reply to Jenny42 [2014-07-17 07:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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fleur-de-Lis4444 [2014-06-22 08:39:04 +0000 UTC]

it look really beautiful..wow

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SimplySilent In reply to fleur-de-Lis4444 [2014-06-25 00:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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fleur-de-Lis4444 In reply to SimplySilent [2014-06-25 06:17:01 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome ^^

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Knifapotamas [2014-06-18 16:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Simply gorgeous!

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SimplySilent In reply to Knifapotamas [2014-06-18 16:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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brazance [2014-06-11 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

lovely painting but wouldn't there be ripples on the water if there was enough wind to fly a kite just a observation ^^

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SimplySilent In reply to brazance [2014-06-18 16:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha, indeed. Never thought about that one before, but that's certainly true.

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Kristofferson-kiniji [2014-05-29 03:30:04 +0000 UTC]

lovely painting, keep up the awesome work

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SimplySilent In reply to Kristofferson-kiniji [2014-06-05 18:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear.

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Kristofferson-kiniji In reply to SimplySilent [2014-06-08 00:49:36 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome~!

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ChasMandala [2014-05-16 01:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy this work of art - from the beauty of the sky and reflection below that encompasses the complete view, to the lone figure with her kite off to the side. Such a wonderful drawing; great job!

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SimplySilent In reply to ChasMandala [2014-05-16 23:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you for your very thoughtful comment!

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ChasMandala In reply to SimplySilent [2014-05-16 23:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Of course! You're very welcome!

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Abyss-Valkyrie [2014-03-27 15:34:38 +0000 UTC]

oooohh!This is sooo seriously pretty!!I love the little girl there,she seems alone but so hopeful somehow!! <3!!love this artwork!

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SimplySilent In reply to Abyss-Valkyrie [2014-05-03 02:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Applemac12 [2014-02-28 21:19:29 +0000 UTC]

So lovely!

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SimplySilent In reply to Applemac12 [2014-03-03 03:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Babou-Shka [2014-02-02 09:39:03 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely.

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SimplySilent In reply to Babou-Shka [2014-02-02 17:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Babou-Shka In reply to SimplySilent [2014-02-06 18:17:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Arkueid0 [2014-02-02 01:19:36 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely, keep doing digital painting plz n-n!

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SimplySilent In reply to Arkueid0 [2014-02-02 01:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you very much for your kind words!

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Arkueid0 In reply to SimplySilent [2014-02-02 01:30:50 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome n-n!

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TeaPhotography [2013-12-07 08:32:19 +0000 UTC]

This really looks amazing!

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SimplySilent In reply to TeaPhotography [2014-01-04 22:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It was a lot of fun to do.

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Ruri-dere [2013-12-02 20:18:27 +0000 UTC]

this is super lovely! love the skys and concept!

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SimplySilent In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-12-03 05:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you very much!

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CaptainMisuzu [2013-11-25 16:04:56 +0000 UTC]

#That's so beautiful, soft and warm i like it a lot <3 I would love to do the same, the blue and the cloud are so amazing, like a full landscape of the sky.

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SentanaKitsune [2013-10-24 20:41:44 +0000 UTC]

This looks magnificent! I love how you drew the clouds and the reflections. Fabulous work!

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SimplySilent In reply to SentanaKitsune [2013-11-02 19:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~

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SentanaKitsune In reply to SimplySilent [2013-12-06 03:41:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome c;

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Fantasy-Fashionista [2013-09-28 23:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Woo, this picture makes me feel kinda dizzy. It's like it's spinning, sort of. I can't tell whether that's fully sky, or part sky, part ocean!! Very interesting concept!!! Must've taken a while to make all those clouds. xD Great work!!

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SimplySilent In reply to Fantasy-Fashionista [2013-09-29 00:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I suppose!


And thank you! It did take quite a while since it's my first time working with clouds.Β 

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Fantasy-Fashionista In reply to SimplySilent [2013-09-29 02:34:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Well, you did an excellent job for a first time!!!

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