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Sinceredir — Broken Bone

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Description The fracture was twisted. He had to set it. Shortly his hand slid over Molachla’s face, calming her. Then he determinedly grabbed her ankle with one hand and the knee with the other and in one quick movement stretched the cramped leg and set the bone.
Molachla cried out shortly and he felt how she pulled at his cape, to which she had held. But then it was done. With his foot he held her ankle while he put the splints in place and began to bandage the broken leg.


Tassadar watched the dark templar calmly and couldn’t help but to be impressed.
The prelate acted with such determination and skill and... Tassadar saw one of the tales which were told about the dark kin on Aiur falsified. The dark templar definitely did not kill their weakest team members or left them to die when injured. He saw in every move of the prelate how dearly he cared for his companion. And... he could have run away. He had stayed by her, though he knew he endangered his life.
Tassadar couldn’t help but to feel respect for him.


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from my fanfiction "meeting on Char"

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Comments: 12

blue-but-beautiful [2012-04-09 16:43:37 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous, you really manage to make the protoss expressionate. A great scene here, and I agree with a previous poster, Zeratul's hand looks amazing! I'd also be interested in reading this fiction, do you have a link to it?

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Sinceredir In reply to blue-but-beautiful [2012-04-10 05:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you The story is not online though, sorry, it's been years since I "left" the Starscraft fandom and the story was never completed. But thanks for your interest!

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blue-but-beautiful In reply to Sinceredir [2012-04-10 18:51:33 +0000 UTC]

I wondered if that might be the case, no worries, was just curious to read any decent Protoss fanfiction out there, there's not much, sadly

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Sinceredir In reply to blue-but-beautiful [2012-04-11 18:40:05 +0000 UTC]

That's true. Unfortunately I'm one of those writes who never manage to end a story

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blue-but-beautiful In reply to Sinceredir [2012-04-11 18:44:56 +0000 UTC]

LOL I have a touch of that myself I currently have 3 stories on the go, all of which I never know if I'll have time to finish

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Xhydralisk [2007-12-22 19:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Heh, with so few Dark Templar, it really does make sense.

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Coralle [2007-11-08 10:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Do you have your fanfiction posted anywhere? I'd be really interested in reading it~!

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Sinceredir In reply to Coralle [2007-11-29 19:20:16 +0000 UTC]

I tried to write you an email, did it reach you?

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Coralle In reply to Sinceredir [2007-11-29 23:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I'm bad for not checking my email frequently. I'm sorry! I'll write a reponse for you after I get home from work.

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Sinceredir In reply to Coralle [2007-12-01 08:14:47 +0000 UTC]

you got mail story is in your mailbox

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Sinceredir [2007-11-08 08:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment! Hm, indeed, now you said it - Tassi is a bit of a shrinkhead here
As for the nerve cords: I imagined a way the protoss work before blizzard developed the cut-off-cords. And with my concept they would die would they cut those cords, that's why my protoss will never have cut cords. btw I find it pretty silly to think of those cords as of kind of antennas

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Oyee [2007-11-07 21:17:10 +0000 UTC]

I just twitched when I saw the poor Dark Templar. You just catched the feeling right. *rubs her own ankle* Zeratul's left hand is just beatiful. Nice work with the clothes and the folds on them thought they seem a bit too silk-like/easy. And Tassadar's head is a bit uhm... small? Really nice pic by the way. I like it.

One more thing: Dark Templars cut off their nerve cords.

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