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Sincerely-Anon — My bed
Published: 2010-01-28 19:11:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 533; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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I want to go back to bed,lay down and rest my head,
My bed doesn't ask how I'm feeling,
or wonder about the way I'm dealing,
My bed comforts with out even trying,
it doesn't need to know why I'm crying,
Blankets surrounding me,
I am whoever I want to be,
All warm and cozy,
no longer feeling lonely,
In my bed I can go without makeup,
and not worry about an awkward wakeup,
My bed doesn't bother with what's wrong,
it will stay here with me all night long,
My bed is still there every morning,
it doesn't make fun of me for snoring,
My bed doesn't laugh at my mistakes,
it knows I have many more to make,
My bed is there in times of need,
and it always lets me take the lead,
It doesn't judge what I eat,
or worry if I keep it neat,
My bed welcomes my tears,
it doesn't question my silly fears,
But most importantly,
my bed is here for me,
I can always go back to bed,
lay down and rest my head.
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Thank you, thank you,
I shall now go view!
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this is sooo nice. i love it. you made my day so much better haha
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for the lovely comment and such
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True as well, sometimes your bed is your best friend. I really like this, it's true and quite comforting, at least to me, and it rhymes nicely.
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I thank you very much!
for all your comments and such.
rhyming seems to come naturally,
I think flow is what needs work actually.
I am still pretty new to writing lit,
only been at it for a month and a bit.
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A month, really? Well, you're really very good at it! Feels like you've been writing for much longer!
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well thank you,
and yes it's true.
I feel like poems were always bouncing around,
but I never actually decided to write them down.
I still don't really show them to anyone,
the mystery in anonymity is quite fun.
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Haha, yeah, it is, well I'm glad you decided to share them anyway, no matter how anonymous, they're very good!
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thanks, so are yours
I can't wait to see some more
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A bed is indeed a good friend, though I myself find a book to be closer.
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books are good too,
maybe better for you.
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ah but what better combination then both
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couldn't agree more,
with what you said before.
books + bed =
a place to rest my head,
and a place for reading,
while silently dreaming.
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I love how your poems rhyme, I just cant get poems that dont have some sort of flow to them.
You choose your words beautifully and I can really relate to the poem as well. Sometimes that's all I want as well
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rhyming is tricky,
but when you get it right it can be pretty nifty.
A lot of my inspiration comes from Dr. Seusse,
I guess you could say he is my muse.
And as with anything, practice makes perfect,
I'm sure if you try you can come up with a great word effect.
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Im not so good myself. But its just my favorite thing to read.
Freaky Fred, now he is my favorite. He was on Courage the Cowardly dog, tell me, have you heard of him?
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I'm sorry, I'd have to say no,
although I'm sure he is a great fellow,
don't let go of that inspiration,
it has a beautiful way of spawning creation.
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Wow. I love the line 'it doesn't make fun of me for snoring," that's so true ^^
You did a good job with the rhyming, it all flows pretty well. Some lines don't make sense to me, like how you can be whoever you want to be, or how it doesn't change the song.
Beds are nice. Still, this may be more effective if you talked like this about a real person. You can't spend the rest of your life in bed.
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maybe that's true,
but sometimes I wish I could,
my bed allows me to do anything I want to do,
even some things I never would.
Thanks for your time,
glad you enjoyed my rhymes,
please feel free to read some more,
I will be submitting poems galore!
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Despite how rhyming may sound deep
A bed's main purpose is for sleep
But for whatever may come to an open mind,
write down and share,
until next time
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sleeping may be the intended purpose,
but without a sleeping person my bed is not worthless,
my mind seems to open pretty wide,
Sharing I have never really tried,
I'm starting to enjoy it,
it seems people even enjoy what I have writ!
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I'm glad to hear you enjoy writing
Just try to work a little more on your timing
Poetry flooows, like the wind on blue water
And the spelling of such words must not falter (writ?)
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writ is perfect spelling in the dictionary I wrote,
I appreciate your notes,
I will keep them in mind,
and try not to mess up my rhymes.
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