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Published: 2008-12-18 04:55:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 515; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description You

In
Some supermarket in California,
We were searching for Whitman
Behind some grapes.
Alas, he was not there.

Leaving
Played a game of chess
In some tragic Wasteland
What else is there to do?
Our barn was burnt down
Years ago.

We took our shopping cart
Filled with various items—
Clothes, blankets, canned peaches,
Sunflower seeds, 2 flashlights, hard candy,
Tissues, Sprite, a soup pan,
Hardtack (which I made myself)
And a sleeping bag, for when it’s cold.

I have never been cold,
Beside you before,
You never mentioned it either.
Those are the nights I realize
That my entire study of American Literature
Has never prepared me for the American Life.

No American Dream has come from
Whaling, living in the woods, traveling west.
No civil overthrow of the government
Will brand you with an A.

You taught me that,
As well as other
Momentous,
Forceful,
Impulses.
But most of all,
You are my incorruptible dream.

I will beat on against the current…
Which way does your beard point?
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Comments: 12

WhenCh3wySmiles [2009-01-07 00:05:05 +0000 UTC]

This is such a beautiful, thought-provoking poem. I love it.

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singovermyradio In reply to WhenCh3wySmiles [2009-01-07 01:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you very much. I am quite proud of it

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LayraBlack [2008-12-20 22:30:17 +0000 UTC]

It's a bit hard to me to understant, but I think I get the whole meaning. Like it!

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singovermyradio In reply to LayraBlack [2008-12-21 03:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SubChaos915 [2008-12-18 07:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes I am

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Destromas [2008-12-18 05:52:40 +0000 UTC]

I like the way this builds towards the end. I read it first and hardly gleaned a thing, but I kept reading it and it started making more sense.

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singovermyradio In reply to Destromas [2008-12-18 05:58:34 +0000 UTC]

That's usually how my poems go. I don't know why... they all just end up that way. Probably because in the beginning, I don't even know what I'm talking about, and then the poem helps me analyze how I feel or what I want to say, and it all makes sense in the end.

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CSnyder [2008-12-18 04:57:42 +0000 UTC]

very cool and i love the style you wrote this in

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singovermyradio In reply to CSnyder [2008-12-18 04:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CSnyder In reply to singovermyradio [2008-12-18 04:59:01 +0000 UTC]

welcome, i just read the artists comemnts , very cool
ive heard his name of course but not to familiar with his work

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singovermyradio In reply to CSnyder [2008-12-18 05:05:46 +0000 UTC]

I think his most famous work is "The Wasteland." I'm sure you can find it online somewhere. It's long. haha

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CSnyder In reply to singovermyradio [2008-12-18 05:07:05 +0000 UTC]

cool, no worries bout that

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