dustymoth [2003-05-16 13:35:26 +0000 UTC]
I really love the line "Breath was raped wild"
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greatbigcuddle [2003-05-08 13:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Perfectly balanced metre, easy flowing rhyme...very nice. It's good that it's purely expressive like this because it allows the reader to apply it to anything the feel the same way about