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Published: 2003-05-08 13:20:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Remedy for the screams
Bottled up with cold tears
Soak the cloth clean
Drench sanity in fears

Breath was raped wild
Dragging sense in slack doubt
Grasp the last mild
Suffocate the damp shout
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dustymoth [2003-05-16 13:35:26 +0000 UTC]

I really love the line "Breath was raped wild"

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greatbigcuddle [2003-05-08 13:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Perfectly balanced metre, easy flowing rhyme...very nice. It's good that it's purely expressive like this because it allows the reader to apply it to anything the feel the same way about

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