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Published: 2007-02-11 02:56:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 12369; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 49
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You're reading "Plight of the Freedom Fighters!"Please start at the beginning! It's a good place to start! XD
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Derwent pencils on cardstock...words added on "Paint'
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[ Characters are Jet, Smellerbee and Longshot from "Avatar the Last Airbender" owned by Mike and Bryan]
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Comments: 51
Gah, awesome! Jet's face in the 4th panel almost makes me want to cry... in a good way.
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Panel 4 brings out the most expression. It almost made me cry tears of joy D:
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Hehe. Friends when you really need them. I really like how they are smiling. Great work!
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i thought i'd let you know, i am reading!
nice job. i have a story about Jet in Lake Laogi too.....but it isn't on DA yet, i plan to re-draw it, because it looks like crud
very nice job. i shall keep reading!
-L44
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awww, the're like family, dang it this page makes me a little choked up.
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VERY good stuff- I love the way you characterised these...well...characters 
Looking foward to seeing more 
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heh,,u know, as soon as I finished that page..i realized that^^' I was like...oh well. But thanks so much for commenting!^^
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Aw....dammit, I totally had an idea like this!!
...but I'm to lazy to actually draw it...so meh.
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Awwwwwwww I just love the trio!!! 
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Nice job. I loved the sentiment in this scene. :3 And very nice drawings.
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This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next! *lasso Katara and demand healing water perhaps?*
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katara on bison in sky right now...^^'
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"Onward Freedom Fighters!" That's SO Jet. I love how you draw/write Bee. She's so pretty and awkward. It's funny.
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Oh goodie^^ thanks so much...it's easy to write for bee cuz she reminds me of me XD (was mistaken for a boy a lot when little >.< )
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Oh goodie^^ thanks so much...it's easy to write for bee cuz she reminds me of me XD (was mistaken for a boy a lot when little >.< )
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I really like your work here especially the shading. However there are a few issues that I feel it would be helpful to raise; 1) I enjoyed the story, it was charming and show's potential for development, but not much really happened in it, you should always ask yourself if you really need every panel you draw. And also possibly consider how they 'read' across the page a little more. 2) The figures seem a little stiff and at times anatomically incorrect.
Just so you don't think I'm mean, here's some positive stuff; I really like the cover (Although the font you used is very dull in my opinion, do you know of blambot.com? They have loads of free fonts for use by independent comic makers), I also think that pages 2 and 3 had a nice flow to them with some lovely detail in the facial expressions.
OK thats my 2 pence worth. Can't wait to read the next installment.
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Hey, thanks for the input. It's good to get constructive comments cuz they make me wanna improve and to be honest...I know I can do better.
These first pages were rushed a bit but the next 5 I'm really gonna take my time on and make them shiny and spiffy XD
I'll check out that font-site too. Thanks again *salutes*
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No problemo, you have obvious skills! I'd like to do a short indie comic myself, but it's hard to find the time these days... Maybe one day...
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That was sad, sweet and even a little bit fun at the same time. It really touched me somehow.
You've made a great job here!
... and I love your artwork. Some panels are awesome! (for example Jet and Smellerbee on page 3 *_____* And Jet coughing blood... I suppose it isn't easy to draw blood and a fitting expression. Love it!)
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*bows humbly* Thank you so much^^ I'm glad to hear it!
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Ha ha, laughed at the last panel...
now... real comment time.
I was so drawn in that I went right through all the pages and almost forgot to say something for them. But I didn't want you to think I just looked right through the art. Great story so far... in that it holds the attention of the reader. I am excited for the next five... though I am ready for a nice long wait here.
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Wow, thankyou^^ I'm glad it had that effect XD
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FEEL THE LOVE, PEOPLE!!! definitely got a brother-sister realtionship going on between Bee and Jet, especially that last comment!
This doujin is deh AWESOME. Can't wait for more!
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Can't wait to supply more! Thanks so much for the wonderful comments!
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*sniff*
I really like how all your work has so much attention to shading
and to have all that lovely work put into a comic as well... it all looks great!
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heh...I bet they sure wish that Jet could hacve had a bit less muscle..
Totally awesome panels, the details are great! Looking forward to teh next five-page update...
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^_^; I don't get who they are and all but it's awesome comic work :3
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i liked it,the detail in each panel is great and really moves the action along
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hehe...thankya! it comes on at my lunch time^^'
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Thanks for all the comments! I appreciate it soooo much! ^^
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The irony here is that I was drawing jet when I saw you put up new Freedom Fighter stuff.
..I started spazzing out. >>;
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Terribly! Prevention is the only cure.
Alas, it is far too late for my poor soul.
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>.< I'm def a lost cause as well^^
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We should totally go to a leper colony.
..ROAD TRIP!
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