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JadeHades [2009-10-23 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]
I really like it, it is very evocative of the sense of loss. Eventually, gradually people move on from the loss but are unsure if they should or even can. They hear and see memories of the loved one and the hurt renews itself once more. Very good imagery. I especially liked the part where you spoke of drifting and the lines started to drift away from any semblance of structure.
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SirenAlecto In reply to JadeHades [2009-10-23 09:59:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You know how highly I value your opinion, so it's nice to hear you liked it.
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Persnicketese [2009-10-23 00:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Kyyaaaaaaaaa...this is so good!
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SirenAlecto In reply to Persnicketese [2009-10-23 10:03:03 +0000 UTC]
Lol. It's ok, and I'm happy with how it's turned out, but it's not my current favorite.
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Persnicketese In reply to SirenAlecto [2009-10-27 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Is definitely good one! >.> Featuring you in a journal of mine. MWAHAHAHAHA
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SirenAlecto In reply to Persnicketese [2009-10-27 10:25:10 +0000 UTC]
ACK! But, but, but... Still not enough stuff to feature!
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