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Published: 2009-10-22 18:52:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Sometimes


Where are you?

During the day I pretend that
            When I turn to share a joke or whisper
            It is not you I seek
And I did not forget your loss
            Momentarily

Nights I dream of you,
           Of purity
                       Shimmering
on gossamer
Wings
            Snuffed out

And while I am no stranger to nightmares
            I awaken close to
Tears
            That will not fall

Sometimes I see you
            The curve of your cheek
A twist of your lips
             The ripple of your hair on the breeze

Sometimes I hear you
            Your laughter in a crowded hall
            Your whisper in the dark

Sometimes I put myself through torture
             Buying trinkets that remind me of
you
So that I fall into memory when I
             Stumble across the pieces
                        Drifting through my
life
in your wake

Sometimes it scares me
The days I don't hear you
                        Or see you
                                    Or smell you on the wind

It's all fading
Like mist in the wind
You're fading

But sometimes…
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Comments: 9

JadeHades [2009-10-23 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, it is very evocative of the sense of loss. Eventually, gradually people move on from the loss but are unsure if they should or even can. They hear and see memories of the loved one and the hurt renews itself once more. Very good imagery. I especially liked the part where you spoke of drifting and the lines started to drift away from any semblance of structure.

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SirenAlecto In reply to JadeHades [2009-10-23 09:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You know how highly I value your opinion, so it's nice to hear you liked it.

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Persnicketese [2009-10-23 00:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Kyyaaaaaaaaa...this is so good!

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SirenAlecto In reply to Persnicketese [2009-10-23 10:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Lol. It's ok, and I'm happy with how it's turned out, but it's not my current favorite.

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Persnicketese In reply to SirenAlecto [2009-10-23 23:26:18 +0000 UTC]

What is?

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SirenAlecto In reply to Persnicketese [2009-10-26 10:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Playing for Keeps.

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Persnicketese In reply to SirenAlecto [2009-10-27 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Is definitely good one! >.> Featuring you in a journal of mine. MWAHAHAHAHA

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SirenAlecto In reply to Persnicketese [2009-10-27 10:25:10 +0000 UTC]

ACK! But, but, but... Still not enough stuff to feature!

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Persnicketese In reply to SirenAlecto [2009-10-28 00:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Plenty XD

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