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Published: 2014-02-23 08:58:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 6
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Drawing time: about 1:30Internet, I present to you the greatest thing I have ever created. I know that this will probably still flop as far as the attention it gets goes, but that's okay, because drawing this was one of the most enjoyable experiences I've ever had, and even more, and that's what matters.
AND, as you can see, I have 'requested critique' on this one, for the first time actually. Yes, I would really appreciate it if someone could give a critique on this one.
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youtu.be/j4-7a0ig4MM
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Comments: 7
OOOOOOHHH ID LOVE TO CRITIQUE BUT BEFORE I SAY ANYTHING: i dont really critique, and this will be more biased to my taste of art *u*
what i love about this is the fact you can understand the 'mood' right away, and brie's ears and pose help with that understanding. The communication between this piece and the viewer is really good ;D
most of what comes next will be nit-picky since its already such a great piece ;DDD
Brie seems oddly placed, right in between the rule of thirds line and the center, and same goes for the rest of the background; barely anything falls on the rule of thirds making it kinda unique *u*
the colour harmony is really nice between the warm and cool colours, and everything is pretty 'sharp' in colours and shading, except for the sky which doesnt have the same theme. Your eyes get kinda lost when you look up there. (also the branches are attracting too much attention with the high contrast)
after staring for awhile, i noticed that it seems like Bries watching the sun rise/set, but it doesnt seem very concrete. if you wanted to make that more of the focus, then the shading and colour saturation could be pushed a little more
OVERALL THIS IS REALLY GOOD-- I AM HONORED TO HAVE THE CHANCE TO CRITIQUE THIS AAAHJKLFDHJKSL ;DDDDDDDD
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Gahh this is so pretty! Im very impressed by the amount of detail and shading that you've put into the grass and the rocks and that sword looks so pretty with how the light hits it, it gives it a sort of stone like quality, not sure if that's what you where going for with it but if it is you did an amazing job!
One thing id like to point out though is the eyes, the color doesn't really match the sort of grey feel that the rest of the picture has, and while its good to have certain aspects stand out, i think that maybe given the lighting you could have done that while still matching the less vibrant color scheme.
B ut other then that I think you did a great job!
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my favotrite part about this is the mountains, i usually need a base to make mine
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Oh wow, you're right about the eyes... I'll keep that in mind next time :3
Thanks for the critique!
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