Xael-Amari [2006-12-03 05:31:48 +0000 UTC]
No errors found as far as grammer goes, but I have to ask which Hawaii island?
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blueicefox54 [2006-11-18 01:48:00 +0000 UTC]
tis is short chapter but good
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sirfoxyprincess In reply to blueicefox54 [2006-11-18 05:19:03 +0000 UTC]
thanxs
blueicefox54 In reply to sirfoxyprincess [2006-11-18 23:25:31 +0000 UTC]
welcomes