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Published: 2008-01-20 21:56:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 28687; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 719
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End of the "boring" part.
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Never open the door to unknown people.
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I am the type that would have let him in and found myself in a lot of trouble!
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Eh... you're not "JenniferInDistress" by chance, after all.
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To compare to Alfred Hitchcock may be silly, but he was the master of suspence. Without tension and buildup there wouldn't be as much satisfaction at the payoff. Well played.
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You know, finally getting to the 'good stuff' as others are calling it wouldn't have such a sweet feeling if you hadn't masterfully 'built it up' by doing 14 frames of non-bondage stuff! I know in your other story, the one with the brother and sister, it had PLENTY of shots without any bondage, and yet it ended up being an excellent piece of work overall. Stick to your methods, Sir Jerry Lone, as they are just right
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Well... thank you very very much! 
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Oh boy! The good part's coming up! hehe.
But ya, the only problem I see with the shadowing in this pic is on her left leg(our right)
Haven't noticed anyone talk about it, at least. There's just a random circle of shading on her leg. But who cares? the picture is so nice you don't even notice it!
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Hardware shadows are weird but usually not "random". In my opinion, it's the shadow of her right forearm.
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Hey, why don't we join forces??? You go for the mistakes in the drawing and I go for the mistakes in bondage???
Way to go!!!
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And what if, instead of forces, I'd join your heads... literally?!?!?
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that's what you get for answering the door in your underwear
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Maybe in this occasion the result would have been the same also if she wore a long dressing gown, but your advice is nonetheless absolutely correct... and for our luck, Bridgette didn't follow it!
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lol, of course it was correct
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That's more like it... coming to the real stuff!
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I dunno, but the gun looks kinda small, like a Derringer or something like that.
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Actually it's a Python gun!
Maybe the angle gives you that feeling.
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I figured it was a Colt Python, I'm just saying that yes, the angle gives me the impression that it's a Derringer.
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All your watchers will be happy to see the immortal words "put your hands behind your back" !
Nevertheless, the first chapter was very solid: apart from a beauty and a beast, a possible Prince Charming has been introduced as well.
OK, Sir Jerry... get out your bag of ropes!
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You know, I'm fundamentally a conservative. The classic ways are always the better for me.
The bag of ropes is coming...
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I suspected already that you were a Swiss banker during working hours...
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Hehehe. I've been waiting for this. By the way, in some of the first pics, the shadows looked rather pixelated, but they look quite nice here. You got yourself an upgrade or something?
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No. The shadows produced by the hardware rendering are quite rough and "squared", but from certain angles it's less evident.
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Really ... and about time too!!!
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I think most of his watchers thought the same thing as me and you...
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Oh... I'm very sorry. My hard disk seems to have crashed. All pics lost! Aw...
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Backup is good
Backup is right
Backup let's you sleep at night
Always do your backup!!!
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So... you guys don't believe in anticipation and building the tension when it comes to tying up damsels?
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I had a feeling I shouldn't have replied to that comment, or made a comment altogether. Now I feel like an ass.
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Not at all, I was only joking: after all this *is* what we came for.
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Hmm. Right. I'm just never good at making first impressions, and assumed I'd screwed up for the millionth time.
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Do worry not Vortale, it is an "house joke" between SirJerryLone and me, we ALWAYS criticize each others jobs (not that he has much to critique on MY work!!!)
(BTW ... he did take us by surprise with this twist of the plot ... but let's not tell him ...)
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Or maybe they believe in it, but are saying that my way to build the tension is crap!
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Selfcriticism is the ninja way to improvement - Japanese proverb
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Ninjas are all dead, aren't they?
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Go back to your drawing board, wise guy. Maybe it was a pirate proverb anyway.
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