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SirStudMuffin In reply to ??? [2017-10-22 15:19:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! Ill keep those in mind next time I draw!
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SirStudMuffin In reply to MedusaRedden [2017-10-22 06:22:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! Ill definitely keep those things in mind! Ill think about those next time I draw, thanks again!
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Nyarlathotep-Kisses [2017-10-22 02:26:39 +0000 UTC]
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Greetings and salutations! Yes, I am from Project Comment too. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
This is soooo cute. The sweet smile, the "Look at me! Look at me!" eyebrows, the wreath of leaves at the bottom (they're in a variety of light and dark shades and colors! Nice touch!). Now, about the background: instead of pink, I would have chosen a golden or brown background, to give it a bit more autumn feel. As for the hands, I think they're cute too, but I have to agree, they're a little off. Perhaps you could have spread the fingers apart a little more? Or had them more fanned out? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Happy (early) Halloween, and I hope you have a super sparkly day!
(Why do I keep forgetting to rate them before I click submit? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>)
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SirStudMuffin In reply to JamyHamy [2017-10-21 17:06:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! Ill definitely keep those in mind!
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JamyHamy In reply to SirStudMuffin [2017-10-21 20:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Aww thamks. Glad I could helpΒ
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lucathewerewolf In reply to SirStudMuffin [2017-10-21 17:03:12 +0000 UTC]
your welcomeΒ
I love giving artist tips to help them get better hope those helpΒ Β Β
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lucathewerewolf In reply to SirStudMuffin [2017-10-21 17:08:42 +0000 UTC]
I will btw your art is amazing so I think I'm gonna watch u
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SirStudMuffin In reply to HopelessRomantic1997 [2017-10-21 15:40:26 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, I'm super proud of this picture and I am super happy to see that people like it so much! ^v^
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SirStudMuffin In reply to Toxic-Destiny [2017-10-21 15:16:03 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh tysm for the critique! Yeah I originally was gonna just do a coloured sketch so i didn't pay attention to the hands which I really should have when I started making it lineless haha
I also didn't notice that thing about the teeth! I did notice the smile was kinda forced looking (I did the same thing with the hands, noticed it but didn't fix it later haha) but I definitely didnt see that specific spot!
Again, thank you so much! It is super helpful ^v^
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SirStudMuffin In reply to clw23 [2017-10-21 15:23:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! I'm glad you like the colour scheme and yeahhh I noticed issues with the hands, but was too lazy to fix them lmao
Ill definitely pay attention to the hands and shading more, and I will try to fix issues I see instead of being lazy haha
again, thank you so much!
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instarsa [2017-10-22 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute! Your colors are so soft and the concept is very creative!!~ >u<
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swyman17 [2017-10-22 01:31:03 +0000 UTC]
YEEEEE I LOVE IT :"D
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swyman17 [2017-10-22 01:28:47 +0000 UTC]
EEEEEEKKKKK I love ittt :-: it is makin me CRY
CUZ ITS SO GOOD
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Cake-a-Tron [2017-10-21 22:25:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow such smooth shading! Looks amazing! Autumn is a very nice season.Β
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Chaotic-Crustacean [2017-10-21 18:27:44 +0000 UTC]
HEY AMIGO i dropped by straight from ProjectComment Β
As I observed, this is your first lineless artwork ( which I never try to be honest because i don't know how I will make it work ) and by that personal remark I'm actually really impressed by this. Now, let's go in topics here:
- Leaves: They really catch my attention specially because of the title ( hur dur ) but the thing is, it's not a generic artwork, like, "autumn" and it's just like, leaves. The leaves are there for detail, and simply enough they add a LOT to this piece. Because the background is simple, the leaves really give an extra detail that makes this piece to NOT be bland. That's why I particularly like them and how they were placed over the character. They color also matches the pumpkin and I don't know how to put it simply but, I guess it gives an "addition" to the pumpkin as well.Β
- Character: The character design is simple but the smooth and soft shading add the necessary detail to not make it look like it was paper cut, even though I also like that kind of style as well, the simplicity in extreme in this one would not work so well, so I aprecciate the detail and the shading on the character, it gives more dimension and it makes the character look comfy and cozy, which makes the piece in an overall look relaxing.
- Expression: he's just, oh so happy. I can't say no to a cute and adorable face like this. His expression is soft, nothing too exaggerated but nothing too bland. He's happy and that's all that matters. I also like how he's looking to the side instead to me, like something that he's looking at is making he smile. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I like it either way. The way that his eyes also pop out in the piece also is something that attracted me. The blue is a bright color and it mixes well with the other colors.Β
In a general analysis, I really enjoy this piece, and i hope you make more lineless pieces like this in the future ^^
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sworddancer94 [2017-10-21 17:15:05 +0000 UTC]
Awwww this is super cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!!! <3
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creativepotato300 [2017-10-21 16:42:16 +0000 UTC]
This is such a cute drawing!
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Jay-And-Night [2017-10-21 16:23:29 +0000 UTC]
AWwww This is adorable! I love it
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N1nt3nd053 [2017-10-21 14:45:21 +0000 UTC]
Is he waiting for the Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown?
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