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I'm practicing my anatomy and backgrounds. AT THE SAME TIME : DRelated content
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Hay Sita c: I shall crit this because crits are fun, no?
Pff I'll be nice and start with the pros.
~The anatomy is like.. really good, i would say perfect, but nothings perfect, plus theres a few errors.
~The pictures got an epic color scheme, its all shades of blue-ish and the cat and bird's lineart really stands out e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
~The water looks amazing!!
~The shading on the bird and cat looks nice
~The random little shiny things floating around are a cool touch.
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~The sky, the moon and the mountain-y thing could be a bit more blended
~The (right?) hind leg of the cat looks a bit odd, but thats just me and what do I know? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="
~The cat's tail should be up (or down). Cat's tails are almost never horisontal.
Over all this is an AMAZING picture, keep up the good work Sita~
Hope I helped e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
And also you may want some good references: here or here
lol i bet i made some typos o3o
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Lol thanks : D I fixed some of the stuff you pointed out, but not that much because I already blurred everything and I'm too lazy to do it again : D *shot*
But about the horizontal tail, my cat has his like that whenever he walks so I thought it was normal.. xD
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FFF I KNEW I SPELLED HORIZONTAL WRONG lol sorry
my cats walk with their tails in the air so idk
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my cats have sita cat tails
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This picture is absolutely stunning, original, and gorgeous. I don't have have complaints but I'll see what I can do about actually critiquing it.
The Good Stuff:
- The anatomy is pretty spot-on.
- The background, while simple, is beautiful and adds a wonderful touch to the piece, though, it could have been left out.
- The transparency in this picture is absolutely stunning and looks masterful.
- The background and softness of the lines make the picture look so sweet and gentle. And yet at the same time, the white eyes, almost eerie colored lining, and transparency give it an awesome effect.
- The reflections on the water is wonderful.
The Not-So-Good Stuff:
- The raised paw of the cat is a little awkward looking. Making because its not well defined and the lines seperated the indiviual toes are all jumbled and close together.
- The left back leg (our left it's right) looks a bit too small, and the toes could have been defined a little bit.
- The right ear on the cat (our right it's left) looks like it is pointing towards us, while I feel it should be pointed a little more towards the bird because thats what its focused on.
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Danke for ze critique 8D I'll think of that stuff for next time xDD I tried to fix it a bit, but I kinda failed OTL I'll probably practice my paws next : D
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xDD You are welcome :3 It was fun to do. You are very talented un skillful >3
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omg i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! this pic is awesome!!!!!!!amazin and sooo cool
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oh sorry about two commets. I didn't notice that other one.
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woah, this is really good and cool, I'm jealous ;(
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OMG!!! I LOVE HOW GREAT THESE THINGS LOOK! I AM AMAZED AT HOW WELL YOU DRAW THESE THINGS!
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This is amazing! Everything looks great! I like how the cat is more realistic looking. The only thing I would say that needs more improvment is 1. The raised paw looks a bit weird, the way it bends and 2. One of the birds wings looks a bit awkward, I do relize it plucked off one of it's feathers but it seems like to big of a gap
But this deviation is still amazing and beautiful! Keep up the great work Sita! : D
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This is really good, Sita. I think you did the sky and the water-touch thing great.
I would write this in a critique cause I'm a Premium Member, but... my Membership is still proccessing...
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OhdearGod thats amazing
I fail at anatomy and backgrounds XDD
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I love the glow effect! And the background. The color is really good.
If I could write a critique, I would... Exept I don't have a membership...
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Ffffff I am too amazed to say anything that makes sense except that this is AMAZZZZZZING 
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lol I love saying that
"AT THE SAME TIMEE"
But seriously this is awesome. I love thisss. Your so talented and you probably dont even realize it >:C
GO EMBRACE IT SITAAA
NEVER LET IT GO
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I forgot to add in my critique that the moon is a bit flat~
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wtfffff how did you learn to draw like this DDDDB
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Oh my god .__. This is so beautiful! You have plenty of talent :]!
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sitaaaaaaa. <3 this is so amazing!! : D fffffff your anatomy and backgrounds are epic! <3
NEVAR STOP DRAWING OR I'LL DIE. D:
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GIMME YOUR SKILLS OR I MIGHT JUST EXPLODE.
-goes to crit-
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