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Commissions notOpen! Need Watchers? FB fanpage Tumblr TwitterCommission for tlovetech , his OC Luce ..^w^
She's going to school ~
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I love the light with this piece. the composition is nice as well, a classic triangle pose that fills up the page nicely.
however I am concerned about the top left hand. The seam of light that defines her pinky seems a bit too long bringing us out of the moment.
Your other hand seems to have it down alright, but the top left one also has a disproportionate thumb as well which should go somewhat higher.
the fingers are not as rounded and petite as the other hand and seem to have a mind of their own.
Try looking at your own hand in the mirror in this pose. The fingers here seem really lumpy and don't seem to fit the laws of anatomy you instilled with the rest of your piece.
Yet still a very nice addition to your collection! The colors are nice and the overall pose is good 
I know you didn't ask for critiques but I couldn't stop myself!
Feel free to throw it back in my face.
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No, Lol you're right, but I think it could just be part of the artist's style, but assuming you're right the torso, hips, legs, and Left arm is also proportionately off. Even the finger sizes on both of her hands don't match. Also the depth is lacking, but hey these are common mistakes that even I tend to forget to when I draw in an animexreaslistc style. None the less, I really like her face, colors, and concept.
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Yes! But using style as an excuse is hardly a path towards learning. I try to point out the best way to unify a picture in a design oriented fashion rather than pointing out too many things that are simply a part of the drawing. The hand to me is the best way to improve the picture to a point where the whole design works.
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"good mornin', good mornin', we've talked the whole night through, good morinin', good mornin', to you" -Singin' in the Rain
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I really love her pose, the lighting and the colors! Great job^^
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May I just say that your profile pic is the best gif ever created?
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So cute. Love her outfit and the cheery pose. Great job.
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ahh LOOK AT HER!
Aw I say, You've gotten way better at your anime style and those glorious colours, it ties the adorableness together!
I really like the creases on the uniform, it looks so soft and silky ahh
I say, keep up the wonderful, wonderful work!
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Why thank you random chick!Good morning to you too!
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that is fake
its not like she can just walk through a locked door
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good mornin~~~~ㅋㅋㅋ [C-luv & Verbal Jint - Good Morning]
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Lovely job with the lighting. This piece is nice and vibrant, which I happen to like quite a bit.
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So cute! I like the way her eyes are sparkling, they look really shiny
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Good Morning!
You did such a good job on her <3
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A lot cute! She doesn't have a school bagde!
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Cute! Great job with the lighting! Btw, that icon of yours is gonna give someone a seizure. Like holy crap. :3
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I personally don't care for the jewel in her hair (just personal taste, not that it's badly done), but otherwise I really love this picture
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