Comments: 43
CalculatorBomb [2013-11-23 01:37:23 +0000 UTC]
I just read all the parts up to this one. WHY YOU NO HAVE DONE THEN MADE MORE?! I like, spaced out while reading them. I forgot what time it was!
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Marl1nde [2013-11-21 09:59:30 +0000 UTC]
mysterious magiccers
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LucidPhoton [2013-11-20 02:23:23 +0000 UTC]
What kinda creatures are these? Wolf/dragon hybrid things?
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pyradragon [2013-10-15 18:34:08 +0000 UTC]
Just been reading your comic and I just have 1-2 critisims, feel free to ignore this comment. btw I hope I don't come off as a jerk.
Sorry in advance.
Looking at all the pages so far. I feel claustrophobic looking at them. It's like, a lot is going on but we are mostly shown headshots apon head shots of the charatcers talking. It feels like we aren't shown anything new. It doesn't feel as though I am being sucked into the characters enviroment either. It's like the characters are posing infront of a backdrop.
The panels are just so compact and feels over busy in some. Breathers to me feel needed.
I think it would be nice if you did experiments with angles, depth and perspective. Or even taking the time in showing us the characters homes and enviroments.
Here's an example of an online comic I found to show what I mean and to possibly inspire you. www.wormworldsaga.com/chapters…
I know I'm no comic critc or what ever but it's something I wanted to say.
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KimCrysis [2013-10-12 08:22:23 +0000 UTC]
ahhhhhhh I started reading this omg
cant wait till the next part is done
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spectator1234 [2013-10-05 13:31:49 +0000 UTC]
O.o
Ow man...........
this
is
misteriusssssssssss
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spectator1234 In reply to Skaydeei [2013-10-05 17:04:56 +0000 UTC]
no problem!
''disappears into a strange fog''
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Dantedragon [2013-10-05 11:30:30 +0000 UTC]
knew character emerges!!! I reckon that's the thief if that paper actually did get stolen
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victordragon747 [2013-10-05 08:26:57 +0000 UTC]
And then the bad dude appeared! DUN DUN DUN!! Ah Kady, you sure are a great peace maker!
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Mearow [2013-10-05 07:21:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow, awesome page! I love the facial expressions, the shading looks so cool! I just Can’t wait for the Next one!
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Mearow In reply to Skaydeei [2013-10-05 09:18:54 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^
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Bryne-Lasgiathan [2013-10-04 21:59:26 +0000 UTC]
SO MUCH DETAIL! I love this comic!
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Rogue-Numbers [2013-10-04 21:44:27 +0000 UTC]
I liked the kept of the mystery of the new character. It helps to... wait for the viewer to discover more and expect with more love the next page. The shading is still incredible to see and the expressions are accurate for the situation. I noticed the new style, very smooth and really amazing! Still need of a bit of work here and there but it's all fine. The shadows are by far majestically and it's perfect. Excellent job.
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smeagle123 [2013-10-04 21:40:54 +0000 UTC]
So this guy is hiding something.....
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Deathtail-The-DraCon [2013-10-04 21:25:55 +0000 UTC]
love tthe details!interesting story line too!
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Shay-Tank-Dragon-41 [2013-10-04 21:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Kady saves the day!!!! XD
Who the f**k is this evil guy!!!! XD
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Dragon101k [2013-10-04 21:08:30 +0000 UTC]
Think Magister, THINK! You'll surely find the anser...
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Skaydeei In reply to Dragon101k [2013-10-04 21:10:17 +0000 UTC]
Hoho xD
Though i think his name would be Guido xD
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Dragon101k In reply to Skaydeei [2013-10-04 21:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, It fits him...
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Nature-Star [2013-10-04 21:07:16 +0000 UTC]
Uhh a mysteri stange that comic gets better and better
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