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sketch7778 — Kiss the Girl
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Published: 2011-08-04 15:06:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 338; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 7
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I posted the lineart to this a little bit ago. If you want to color it feel free. This is my OCs David and Ally. Still haven't gotten a final look for them but I have a general idea
Sorry guys, I feel like I took a step back in my progression when I drew him and I am still learning wrinkles
But please let me know what you think.Art and Characters (c) =sketch7778
Please do not use without my permission!
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Comments: 13
the sparklies are so pretty~
lol, so you have and oc named david too?
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Thanks!
Yep 
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Hes twiggier than ME! You should buff him up a little! 
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I love the execution of this piece. It's really good.
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Thank you so very much
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I think the wrinkles are really good, especially on the jeans. I think what you could improve with the wrinkles is the shading. In some parts you have dark on both sides of the wrinkle when really one side (the part that's high) should have a highlight and then the shadow should be under the drawn line. Does that makes sense?
But the placement of the lines for the wrinkles itself though
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Thanks! Yes that makes a ton of sense
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exactly that's it
thanks for taking critique well
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No problem
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