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skth00 — held by cold not you
Published: 2006-04-19 00:57:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Can I sleep now it's goneMy heart rusts
Only tears tellhow long
Broken, mended shattered trust
Built inside to fall apart
How many times have you broken my heart
Fragile beuaty
Rests in wake of tears
My life is a ccompilation of all my fears
But I stayed for you in wounded hours
I stayed to grow you
From withered flowers
Grown above the world alive
I lifted you up
You let my down
Only a million knifes
Could peirce like your frown
Digging deep
The scars burn still
This time it's only you I feal
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Nice picture, nice poetry. It's awesome and powerful, it is to the point and conveys powerful emotion, you have used colloquial language so it rocks man.
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Thank you. I actualy wrote this a long time ago,but it was a little different, it was about how I thought that I had let some one down, but in this I have turned it and made it about some one letting me down. I think it's strange that I revised something from about three years ago.
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Yeah well you did a good job and i loved it mate so yeah keep them coming. And i felt what you felt in it i think and thats why i enjoyed it so much, good job!
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THaNk you a million, this writing was painfull and the pain has recongered, I'm doing better than I thought I would be, but I wont know for shure how I feel till I see her again.
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Yeah that's the hard part seeing them again. All i can suggest is to do things to take your mind off the pain and maybe try learning something new (wink wink nudge nudge muay thai). Or get back into guitar or keep making music on your pc whatever floats your boat. But yeah im not looking forward to seeing the chick i was telling you about again i get nervous just thinking about it.
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WEll, tonight I'm just getting drunk, tomorrow I get to tear down a building, haha, that will take my agressions, also I started reading again, however I am considering the fighting thing, becuase in the past I have learned a lot of fighting in times of agression.
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Yeah that's going to be wicked. How are you tearing down a building? And yeah keep up the fighting man even if your not angry it's good to know self defence and at the same time keep fit. Muay Thai al the way mate.
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true about the fighting, and I got to use a good old sledge hammer, we are having a huge fire out in the country, all the beer we can drink and whatever else is left to desire haha.
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That sounds wicked, i wish i could be there to have fun with you and your mates.
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well, we did it, not a room left in there, but I still have agression. I dont know how I destroyed a kitchen, two bedrooms, all the hall ways, like four closets, and the whole time the only thing I used was the big green sledge hammer a normal hammed and my hand and feet, wich was most fun. we burned all the stuff we tore out. some of my freinds go hurt thoufg, because some dumb ass puit a hole through the floor.
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Ha ha sounds like a blast and a good way to release. Sorry to hear some of your friends got hurt, but hey at least you had a good time. Sorry again i haven't been checking out everyone's stuff but i will be onto it soon.
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its all good man, I havent exactly been on a lot lately.
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awesome, poem and drwing.. oh damn, poor skth00, is sad
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A little, considering a whole lot of things that have happend in the last week.
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that is what tends to make us sad.. things that happen....
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i do supose you are right, however, things that happen can leed to other "things" as well.
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