eaglemt [2012-11-18 17:12:03 +0000 UTC]
for me the little horses are normal...
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Skvor In reply to eaglemt [2012-11-19 21:26:56 +0000 UTC]
ah! good for you then, pretty little things
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jeanpierre4jesus [2012-08-02 17:21:38 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful
insicht [2011-12-20 22:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Its very well done! I absolutely love your choice and use of colors here!I also respect how you've drawn out the small shadow and lights, it's hard for me to always go for them at this level of detail - so well done mate!still some small hints:first thing I'd suggest is that the foreground should be way darker to emphasize the fire more, it would feel even more dramatic. right now I wonder where this bright electric light might come from ...second: her arms are a slight bit too short and her head could use a tiny shift or twist to the left (could make it look more lively) and maybe it's also a bit too small, dunno.I mean, if you get rid of that ... it's really a great piece
Skvor In reply to insicht [2011-12-20 23:14:52 +0000 UTC]
ha ha sharp eye you got there Arms lenght is discussable. I think right hand is ok, but left one(the one with sword)may appear strange as it is not very visible that whole arm is curved backward, I'll look into it again . Now, the unknown light source has its place there too, it is just one of ways to highlight the object viewer should pay attention firs. Otherwise, You'll look for the fires and that's not the point of composition And I am yet not speaking about perspective lightness depth... well, I also try something but this time I am very skeptic. And now placement of neck(and head)... I saw the problem long time but I was to lazy to correct it, besides, it is still anatomicaly possible... right? Head should fit 8 times to the whole lenght of the body... I checked it again and "oops!" I have some additional space!It is incredibly hard to draw figure in such detail with no model.anyway thank you for comment and I appreciate your suggestions, hurray I have more "fun" ahead
insicht In reply to Skvor [2011-12-20 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]
if the arm is backwards then maybe only her elbow should be a bit lower, might be enough.I think getting things highlighted can be done by level of detail here and you also have less saturation in the background which is another way to seperate image layers (bg fg), I guess it can work out without the white light, give it a try!
Skvor In reply to insicht [2011-12-24 16:29:07 +0000 UTC]
all done