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Published: 2011-01-21 06:44:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 6
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just posting this here to get some critique. i want to improve my background/ scenery workRelated content
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I think the background is nicely done, especially when it comes to be on the composition and the perspective uniformity of the items and the actual building in question. The only point her here would be enhancing the contrast on some parts of the painting there, like for example the awning. Other than this little suggestion and the slight dis-angled alley at the top-right corner of the image, I say you did really good! Like the others have said, a lot of improvement is beginning to show there, so give yourself a pat on the back!
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Ooh, I see what you mean, I'll work on those! c: Thank you!
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Not a problem there, I expect to see great things from you in a good while, and that isn't to be said often from me, so you can imagine what I try to mean there
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That's very good!! I also want to improve on drawing backgrounds (I'm so horrible at it DX ). I especially like how the light illuminates the ally realistically.
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well I think that's pretty nice. a really good scenery. the angle is good and you did the colors very well. the illumination is pretty good. nice job sweet!
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Hmmm...
Esta vez va en castellano xD
Por ahi deberias darle mas detalle a las cosas mas cercanas a "la camara", pero no se, porque por ahi el contraste lo definen los personajes.
La perspective es de 2 puntos de fuga, no? Esta muy bien hecha.
La parte derecha abajo de la pantalla esta vacia, podrias poner un personaje ahi despues, o un auto, ni idea. O podrias incluso dejarlo asi, por ahi no queda mal.
Para un background, esta de lo mas bien.
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deberias hablar en castellano mas a menudo, bobo D:
detalles como texturas? suena bien c:
si, la perspectiva 2-point. muchas gracias!
originalmente iba a poner una acera, pero como que los anchos de ambas aceras me pusieron un tanto incomoda, asi que lo deje vacio.
gracias!
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Soy un desastre formando oraciones en ambos idiomas xD
PodrΓan ser texturas, recomendarΓa hacerlas mas nΓtidas que un posible personaje. Sigue siendo, sin embargo, mi opiniΓ³n.
Suerte!
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pues aprende a formarlas en tu idioma vernaculo D<
ooh, ya veo c:
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xD Hay veces que uso frases inglesas al estilo de "I hope you fall off a cliff" en castellano. -_-
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Your Welcome
So,Are you going to do more scenery artwork?
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