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PolishedBrain [2013-10-11 22:08:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy, this is it. This is THE chapter that really moved me. I mean, I didn't cry or anything, but some moments in this chapter felt like a punch in the gut. Also, it made me realize that you are great at making dramatic moments. Awesome job, Ms. Sarah!
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SlargTheGnome In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-10-11 23:00:50 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks. Yeah, I was wondering how people would react to this chapter.
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PolishedBrain In reply to SlargTheGnome [2013-10-11 23:39:47 +0000 UTC]
No problem! By the way, you ever thought about making a sequel? I don't mean a sequel to the story itself, but a new Paper Mario story, with new partners and villains.
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SlargTheGnome In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-10-12 00:17:37 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I dunno, I feel like I pretty much ran my creative font dry with this story. (If I tried making another set of partners I don't think I could make them surpass the ones from this story.)
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PolishedBrain In reply to SlargTheGnome [2013-10-12 03:26:05 +0000 UTC]
Yep.
And yeah, I saw in Fanfiction.net that you were planning to write the 'sidequest' stories.
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BladeSquall [2013-10-09 14:17:39 +0000 UTC]
I noticed the SpongeBob reference, but I didn't comment at the time. ...And I feel like an IDIOT for NOT catching onto Daymien and Maizee's relationship this early.
Anyways, I loved Bushwack's character. Basically, he realizes all he's good for is being the pre-dungeon mid-boss and that's the only reason anyone EVER interacts with him, which irritates him.
Also, I can't believe that I didn't recognize how Mario recognized the mushrooms... it was like the Forever Forest from the first Paper Mario.
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SlargTheGnome In reply to BladeSquall [2013-10-09 22:24:26 +0000 UTC]
Pssh don't feel like an idiot, I don't think anyone else caught it. And those mushrooms actually weren't meant to reference anything in particular.
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