Optipus [2017-02-27 23:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Really nice job! The linework is incredibly clean, and the white lines compliment the cell shading nicely.
But, the face does look rather old and tense, and not too much like Angelica. To fix this, I'd suggest maybe not making the cheekbone so defined. It should be a shading detail, not given its own line and highlight.
Otherwise, it looks great! It must've taken a hamil-Ton of work to get done.
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SleepySomni In reply to Optipus [2017-02-28 13:43:10 +0000 UTC]
Aa thank you for the constructive criticism, it's really rare to find nice critiques like that nowadays c:
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