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janie-jones [2015-01-08 10:03:16 +0000 UTC]
wow, standing ovation! "granular momentum", my favorite phrase! and "black fades sunward" is also a close contender great job once again
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0o-elly-o0 [2014-12-13 15:45:33 +0000 UTC]
Although I found it strange at the beginning.. the thought of someone holding their arms across themselves suddenly sprinting down the road.. I can picture the morning dawn and the rays that those hands are trying to catch.
I enjoyed the uplifting ending. This makes my brain feel brighter.
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knucklemoose [2014-11-16 23:02:41 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely lovely.
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mustlovelaura [2014-11-03 06:19:45 +0000 UTC]
I really like the turn your writing is taking. It's optimistic and happy and lovely and beautiful and wonderful and all the other happy adjectives you can think of.
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