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staiqsecto [2022-02-19 21:04:15 +0000 UTC]
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solidgopher [2017-05-18 00:08:16 +0000 UTC]
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Over your past few posts we are seeing a steady improvement on your work. Your proportions are getting significantly better and your faces are significantly less..."scary".
A few things to note though, I'm not sure where she is and is not wet. She has a sheen to her but the rivulets of water break it in a way that looks more like she is wet but someone threw a tablespoon of mercury at her chest and belly. They also don't follow the shape of her body, if that is a water droplet on her chest rolling down, how is it defying gravity like that? If it did it would accent her shape. The way it is, it would look better if they where left out.
Your last couple pics your models had a bit of a stick arm thing going on but she has much more proportioned limbs to the rest of her frame. Her breasts are HUGE, but they hang naturally, they don't look like implants at all and that is a bonus for many. Her waist is not unnaturally slim and her hips are very natural. It gets broken a little on the thigh gap as I can see her hip and the muscle and it kinda weird me out that it ends a little unnaturally, but it could just be me being overly nit picky.
Your faces are getting much better, she has plump lips and a narrow face as most of your girls, but it is not alien in appearance. This looks like a woman that could actually exist! I mean, tits are bigger than her head but it still works very well.
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daddyrichme [2019-02-07 15:18:33 +0000 UTC]
love Asian...love Lucy
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SeanRobbins [2017-08-20 06:01:11 +0000 UTC]
Superb Work! Awesomely beautiful face, extremely lovely, curvaceous figure, slender & not too big but just right & gorgeous colors( very important)!
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Ultramagma [2017-06-12 05:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Very good!
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GoGoDude8 [2017-05-17 22:36:04 +0000 UTC]
OMG so beautiful!
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SlootySlots In reply to Gator3D [2017-05-16 23:25:17 +0000 UTC]
Ok half asian. Increasing the bump is a great idea. Damn, wish I fiddled with that. Thanks
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keoseaghan [2017-05-16 10:41:12 +0000 UTC]
one day or another i'll die and it will be your fault, all your gogeous ladies will give me a hearth attack!
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FaceGenerator [2017-05-16 10:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Well done!
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SlootySlots In reply to Laspe [2017-05-16 23:09:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Lapse! Rock on man
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diegomolina [2017-05-16 05:49:15 +0000 UTC]
like
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TanukiTagawa [2017-05-16 01:21:46 +0000 UTC]
She love play with water,and I'd love play with her!
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FabledHeroes [2017-05-16 00:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Got Milk
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DARKDRAGON1756 [2017-05-15 23:32:22 +0000 UTC]
No critique needed. This is awesome!
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