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SlurpieDoo — You think you can stand in MY property?
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Published: 2018-01-28 16:08:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2113; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 6
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Futre lola! Second digital drawing! again huge help from my boyfriend ♡feels so good to se lola in her true colors ( Lola's future versions colors vary to her usual version)
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I'd like to critique some stuff about this.
1. The anatomy is a bit odd. Even if you consider this a stylistic thing, it seems like you're pushing too hard to make the character slender and sexually appealing. The torn top is a bit unnecessary. For example, her legs wouldn't be able to support her weight.
2. The style looks a bit too similar to Vivienne Medrano. I've seen a few of your other pieces that don't look as similar, and they work really well.
Other than that the coloring is very clean and the shading is very neat. Maybe try to challenge yourself more rather than stick with a cartoon style.
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i am aware of the anatomy mistakes in this piece. its a 2 year old sketch of my oc back when i was into vivz art. all i wanted to do was color it to finaly set the colors in my mind. the torn top is part of her design tho. so i wont change it just because of someones opinion. (oops)
Lolas anatomy is exagerted, impossible and uneven. which is why i love her and have alot of fun drawing and animating her. i find the idea of tiny thin legs supporting a curvey body nice and fluide on the eyes. because yes , keep in mind i use fluid lines and shapes for most lf my art. because it is apealing to me. Hints---> cartoon style. i find it more fun than just drawing a bland pot of pasta and a shoe lace tbh.
excuse typos in this i have a hurt thumb ahaa sorry.
thanks for your critique. but have some advice. dont tell someone wht style to use. its rude and makes em feel unworthy. just like people did back when i used to watch vivzipop stuff. i found it awsome. and got inspired. like any one . now because of comments like these (way more direct tho) i compleatly voided any of vivz content from fear of beeing influenced once again. and it has been that for 2 years now. so yeh.. watch what ye say to lil ol artists like me k? Goodday mortal~♡
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De rien tu as un vrai potentiel ! >u<
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de rien aaa sa f du bien de parler fr de temp en temp xD
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aah oui tu veux faire connaissance?
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jesuisterribleasegenredechosealed
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Lola: -gives him a death stare-
Sean: ..............no.............
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Glad you're getting into digital art!! <3
You using SAI or something else?
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Well your digital art vs your traditional art is rather...eehh? But I'm sure you'll improve more.
-cringes- I can see multiple mistakes though.
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Looks like she can't handle constructive criticism.
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"I'm a bad bitch you can't kill meh!"
K I'll stop
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Loving your improvement with shading! Great stuff♡
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thank you so much hahah.
but yes she will murder u. but concider her as drunk rn
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