Comments: 60
fairytail599 [2016-06-09 20:14:53 +0000 UTC]
NATSU U ALIVE
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Symby121 [2016-04-17 22:15:30 +0000 UTC]
He f@&$ing pushed her and I'm like WHY then I saw an arrow being shot so I was like OHHHHHHHHHHH (I'm so stupid)
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Wolfcutie10 [2014-11-25 02:34:15 +0000 UTC]
AHHH!! did ayone got hit?!
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coolcatboom561 [2014-11-18 21:24:03 +0000 UTC]
KAAH IM TO EXCITED
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Mayalvarado [2014-07-10 21:04:30 +0000 UTC]
More please
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MXNU [2014-07-09 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]
good job~~~~
i'm waiting next page
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monkeyskrillexbae [2014-07-08 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]
can someone give me the link to part 1 (page 1) of this story its really good
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LollipopCherry [2014-07-06 05:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Supspense ish killin meeee!!! X3
So cute!!! I love this story, and i love NaLu!!!
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Mayalvarado [2014-07-06 00:42:42 +0000 UTC]
Please make more soon
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demiprimordialgal [2014-07-04 08:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Still so long T^T Please update more ^^
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Shynekogirl98 [2014-07-01 06:06:54 +0000 UTC]
The suspense is killing me XD
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i-eat-pandas [2014-06-29 01:36:52 +0000 UTC]
Omg what happens?
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NaluLoverForEvs [2014-06-24 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]
OMG NATSU NOOOO!!!!
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wiwiriwi [2014-06-23 09:25:01 +0000 UTC]
can't wait
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HollyBloo [2014-06-23 07:55:26 +0000 UTC]
It´s sooooooo Nice <3!!!!!!
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Caritoooo30 [2014-06-21 23:16:39 +0000 UTC]
:S
pleaseeee!!!!
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natsu159753 [2014-06-21 15:05:28 +0000 UTC]
please MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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Nyannchi [2014-06-18 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]
explosion i feel like lucks gonna get her menory back soon now........ and i also feel like natsu ate it
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cuteypie140 [2014-06-16 22:15:29 +0000 UTC]
DAMN YOU CLIFTHANGERS!!!! DID NATSU GET SHOT WITH THE ARROW OR NOT!!!!!
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Lolipappy [2014-06-15 10:23:55 +0000 UTC]
C'MON!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!
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BlurpleMint [2014-06-14 02:07:40 +0000 UTC]
FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
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Imagination7 [2014-06-10 16:22:52 +0000 UTC]
Wait a minute,the arrow hit on the wall not on Natsu
Which means that it may also have hit between Natsu and Lucy so both might be hurt
Im confused,i dont know,there are too many possibilities on too many explanations of what happened...
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Mimarri [2014-06-10 10:40:18 +0000 UTC]
NOO, NATSU~~! No, no, no, no... Next page, plz!
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axlorg89 [2014-06-08 07:07:19 +0000 UTC]
...
Cliffhangers strike again...
I'm dead.
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LilScarlett [2014-06-05 04:40:05 +0000 UTC]
Vaaaat? Vaaaaat? Vat is that?
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Ion-lightdragon [2014-06-04 16:13:13 +0000 UTC]
please,please, not him!
for gray that's ok, but not Natsuuuuuuuuu!
tell us the next!
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Wolfcutie10 [2014-06-04 02:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Great doujinshi so far! Please make more soon
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Dragon-hime [2014-06-03 23:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Please more!!!!
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CandyLove1 [2014-06-03 23:01:59 +0000 UTC]
what's gonna happen!!!!
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Roszpuncia [2014-06-02 22:59:46 +0000 UTC]
No, no, no!!! Why??? Please, do more!!! This drawing is great!!!
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Dragonslayer25 [2014-06-02 22:24:36 +0000 UTC]
HURRY, I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH LONGER I CAN WAIT!
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Galaxyburstwarrior [2014-06-02 15:39:25 +0000 UTC]
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE D: WHAT HAPPENS?!
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ScarShawn101 [2014-06-02 08:07:28 +0000 UTC]
That was an arrow made of fire?
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ladysnausages [2014-06-02 07:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Natsu, noooooooo!
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OujoAsuka [2014-06-02 04:26:19 +0000 UTC]
NATSU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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MiyuGaze [2014-06-02 04:00:42 +0000 UTC]
What the~ Did Natsu get hit?! WAAAAAAHH!! NO WAY!!
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Hollyleap [2014-06-02 03:08:06 +0000 UTC]
Whaaa!!!!! What is going on!? Natsu notices, pushes her, then KABOOM!
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Rosetiger [2014-06-02 01:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh no!
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