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SMH-REDELK — Unintentional Kiss

Published: 2006-01-08 01:53:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 3383; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 76
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Description Lana finally got Luke to what she thought was the protection of the doorway. He stumbled and turned his saber off as he fell against her, pushing her into the door. Lana wrapped an arm around him and kept him from slumping down with a worried, “Hey come on now stay with me, don’t pass out. Cause I can’t carry you.”

Luke panted as he lifted his head with a small nod. In a sudden moment of clarity he pressed his body against hers to push her into the interior corner of the doorway, out of danger and view from their friends and most of their enemies. He met her surprised gaze while he protectively covered her as blaster fire struck the spot they had just been standing in. The door shook violently from the blast impact and pressed the Jedi into her more, his head spontaneously tipped forward as Lana opened her mouth to give protest. Luke took a moment of pause, and forgot his illness when his lips pressed firmly against hers by mistake. Time seemed to slow down for the Jedi, while the impromptu moment gave way to an unexpected feeling of contentment. Without thinking twice he allowed himself a moment of indulgence when he felt an oddly familiar warmth in his rescuer's lips. He pressed closer. If this was how he was going to meet his end, it was not such a bad way to go, returning the unintentional kiss of an attractive woman. Another blast impact brought the Jedi back to the here and now of his and Lana’s very dangerous situation. He parted from her at once.

If there had been time enough to think about it, Luke would have blushed at the sudden unexpected kiss with Lana. Instead, concerned and feeling the strained illness return, he asked in a pant, “You okay?”

Lana nodded, more then slightly unnerved, and slipped out from between him and the doorway. She grimaced in pain. Her ankle was throbbing mercilessly. Luke leaned heavily against her vaccant spot and felt his stomach give a painful spasm as the illness spiked once again.

“Can you manage? You look like you’re going to be sick,” Lana asked him, while fending off another shot.

He nodded, trying desperately not to be physically ill. At once he reignited his lightsaber and started using it to cut a hole in the door’s lock. The saber burned slowly through the metal.

Lana turned to cover the Jedi while he worked to open the locked door. She finally saw Solaren take a bead on Luke’s unguarded back. Without a second thought, she stepped in front of him, protectively covering him with her own body and aimed her gun.
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This is a follow up illustration to The Hunted [link]
Corellian Pledge: Ch.9 Fight and Flight
This scene would not let me rest until it was put to paper. It took several hours, spread out over several days, to finish. The thing that I am most happy with on Luke are his hands and his saber. I know the saber's not perfect but I am not very good at drawing weapons. Also I do like the way his tunik turned out. Raw silk is not easy to draw either but I think I did okay with it.
I just love the shocked expression on Lana's face. The dark spot on her cheek and neck are bruises, which are also not easy to draw in pencil.
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UPDATE: I do not allow my work to be posted elsewhere (outside of the DA) without permission!
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Comments: 85

SMH-REDELK In reply to ??? [2017-07-26 05:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow Thank you.
If you are so incline to read the prologue and all ten chapters, you can find the full first part of Corellian Pledge in my Gallery.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. 

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starrypawz [2007-12-17 13:20:21 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome work. I love the little story for it as well. And Lana's expression is just classic.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to starrypawz [2008-01-05 09:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed my illustration and the written piece.

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starrypawz In reply to SMH-REDELK [2008-01-05 13:01:13 +0000 UTC]

No probs

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pistachio-god [2007-10-07 13:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Dude! His sister!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to pistachio-god [2007-10-09 04:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Lana is not Luke's sister . Thank GOD!! I love my brother but I'm not kissing him, least ways not like Leia did to Luke in Empire Strikes Back.

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pistachio-god In reply to SMH-REDELK [2007-10-09 09:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Who's Lana? Isn't that picture of Leia and Luke.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to pistachio-god [2007-10-10 02:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Lana is my OC for the Star Wars universe. I came up with her not long after The Empire Strikes Back movie came out in the 80's. Read the artists comments and you'll understand the illustration.

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MiniMiss [2007-08-14 16:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow - I know close to nothing about Star Wars, but I love your picture! It's really wellmade.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to MiniMiss [2007-08-15 02:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you. I'm glad you like it. My suggestion, if you ever want to check out Star Wars, see the original unaltered, trilogy. This includes A New Hope, The Empire Strikes Back and The Return of the Jedi. It was the original three that started all the fun.

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MiniMiss In reply to SMH-REDELK [2007-08-15 05:11:41 +0000 UTC]

I've been thinking about it, so I probably will.

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MyNameIsSchmem [2007-08-12 14:51:22 +0000 UTC]

This is officially the best thing ever.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to MyNameIsSchmem [2007-08-14 04:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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WraithTen [2007-04-15 04:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Just soes you know, I'm a Mara fan and I fav'd this. I LOVE your drawings and your story of Lana and Luke. Way to go!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to WraithTen [2007-04-16 01:41:34 +0000 UTC]

WOW thank you so very much for the awesome comment. I didn't know that you were reading my SW fanfic Corellian Pledge. I hope it was/is an entertaining read for you. I would probably be a Mara fan too if I hadn't made Lana up in middle school, right after I saw Empire Strikes Back. I'm such a big Star Wars geek/ Luke Skywalker fangirl.

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WraithTen In reply to SMH-REDELK [2007-04-16 08:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Uh, me too and I'm so glad to find another Luke fangirl.

I try to get most of my geekiness out on dA, my poor hubby just doesn't get it.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to WraithTen [2007-04-17 02:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know what you mean about getting that geekness out on the DA. Though my husband really doesn't mind it. Guess that's because we met in the line for Return of the Jedi. It will be 17 years of marital bliss come the 27th of this month. OMG 17 years!!!

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WraithTen In reply to SMH-REDELK [2007-04-19 14:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Well let me give you an early "Happy Anniversary"! Congratulations. My hubby and I will be 20 years in July...but I refer to us as living in marital confusion, but that's just me. So here's to us 'older' Star Wars freaks!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to WraithTen [2007-04-22 23:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. We original Star Wars fan so rock. We got to see it when it was good and made sense!!!

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IcyAshford [2007-03-18 11:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome looking sketch!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to IcyAshford [2007-03-23 04:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.

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skywalkerchick [2007-03-05 23:27:23 +0000 UTC]

and thanks for the advice, but, I'm good. hysterical moment is long gone, although, who knows when Hysterical will talke another victiem? lol

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skywalkerchick [2007-03-05 23:23:59 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I got a good chuckle from it too. I just thought that it explained a lot about me and my Luke Skywalker Fangirl-ness.

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skywalkerchick [2007-03-02 21:23:33 +0000 UTC]

wow! Is that suppost to be Akanah?

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SMH-REDELK In reply to skywalkerchick [2007-03-03 23:33:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't know who Akanah is .

The woman in the illustration with Luke is my OC Lana. I got a good chuckle from your hysterical emoticon. I suggest a small brown paper bag, place over mouth and nose and breath slowly, or not.

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TonomuraBix [2006-05-18 07:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Aw that's a really nice scene, and the picture to go with it is awesome! I love her expression... it's such a sweet picture. ^^ Great job!!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to TonomuraBix [2006-05-19 06:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the little story snippet. I was very plaesed with how it turned out.

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mMathab [2006-04-03 17:03:19 +0000 UTC]

wwwwwhoa!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to mMathab [2006-04-03 22:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Glad you it.

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jackieocean [2006-03-17 14:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Good drawing - and the writing has me interested in this story! Is there someplace online that I can read it? It's been a while since I read any decent SW fanfic that uses original trilogy characters.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to jackieocean [2006-03-18 07:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad the illustration and the story tid bit gained your interest. Yes I have some of it in my DA gallery. To save you the trouble of having to hunt it down here's the link to the prologue: [link]

The original trilogy characters is where my heart will always remain loyal to. Well I don't know if it's a decent SW fanfic, I just look at it as my mindless obsessive scriblings, still you are welcome to take a look-see. If you do read it please let me know what you think of it.

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jackieocean In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-03-28 02:02:59 +0000 UTC]

I finally got a chance to read it! I actually found a link to it on fanfiction.net while hopping around through your gallery, and I read the rest of it over there (though curiously, this scene seemed to be missing ). I really enjoyed the story, and it was nice to read some original characters that obviously had a lot of thought put in to them. I like how you write Luke, too. You have a good grasp on his character - I hate it when people make him all emo-I-am-the-last-Jedi-Luke. If you ever write more Luke fics, I'd love to read them.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to jackieocean [2006-03-28 08:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you so much for reading the first part of Corellian Pledge. I am so glad that it entertained you enough to go to fanfiction.net to read the chapters not posted here yet. The scene illustrated above was an added bit that I felt needed to be here to explain another added scene between Terell and Lana in Chapter 6, which I haven't posted here yet. I also did a little editing for the more muture content of Ch.6 Secret Indeavors. It's not a lot just a few descriptives changed is all. To tell the truth I'm a little concerned about posting chapter 6 on the DA because of Bailen and Freya's moment in the tunnels. That and I'm still working on some cover art.

In the second part of CP I have Luke more concerned with what Ben and Yoda have asked him to do about Vader. He is also caught between wanting to tell Leia everything that he learned on Dagobah and keeping her true identity a secret. He's also thinking more about his mother and wondering just how much of her he is seeing in Leia when he looks at her. I think I only bring up the last Jedi thing once or twice but I don't have Luke dwelling too much on that because the thought of killing his father and being near his twin sister and not being able to talk to her about their mother is more important to him than being the last Jedi.

As far as when I plan on posting Part 2 of CP, well it's all written but I'm not sure if I will be posting it on fanfiction.net because not many people seemed interested in it enough to comment. I know parts of the first story draged but well not all stories can be adventurous all the time. The second part doesn't have as much adventure. It has heartache, mystery, suspense and romance. Basically alot of angst and only some adventure. It does however have a lot of Luke in it. And more of Han and Leia too, as well as all the other original secondary characters. Then there are a few new OC characters too.

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jackieocean In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-04-06 02:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, whenever you post the second part I'd love to read it. I have an old account on fanfiction.net, but I haven't written any fanfic in ages. I should try digging up my password for there, I think it's in one of my many notebooks. But I would love to read the ongoing adventures of Luke, Lana, and the rest of the crew!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to jackieocean [2006-04-06 21:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'd love to have you read it. Once I finish posting the rest of the first story here on the DA I might go back and look at CP2; Where lays the Heart of a Hero. There are some little added scenes in the first story that will only show up here on the DA. The next chapter is where the all the new scenes come into play. There just a couple of scenes to help set up the mind set of certain characters in the second story.

What is your fanfiction pen name. I'll go look you up.

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jackieocean In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-04-08 22:54:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm Nissa on fanfiction.net - but be warned, I haven't written anything new in quite some time. I think the last time I wrote a new fanfic story was in 2002. I tend to stick mainly to drawing now, though I always have story ideas floating around in my head. I just never write them down. But here's my account on there:[link]

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SMH-REDELK In reply to jackieocean [2006-05-08 02:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay I just read spin cycle and all I can say is this. . . ....GASPS!!!
That was very amusing. I now visions in my head of Yoda spinning around in a dryer. SO what happens with the cake and Obi-Wan? I think you should write that story out. You should post Spin Cycle here on the DA. It's such a good funny little story.

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jackieocean In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-05-13 19:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Glad you liked it! That was a fun story to write. I still have the cake story in my head, I've just never written it out. I'm keeping my DA gallery to just art for now, but who knows, maybe some day I'll post some writing stuff here.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to jackieocean [2006-04-12 07:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the link I'll go check out your fanfic site.

I'm the same way with the story idea's floating around in my head. I have so many and sometimes it is over run by my drawing muse. I mostly draw things from my story or little scenes that I'm thinking about. Sometimes drawing them out helps me solidify them more as an author. Drives me crazy when I have something in my head and I can't successfully put it to paper or commit it to the computer. For instance I've been trying to illustrate a scene in sequence and it's just not working out for me.

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Nakiliel [2006-02-03 13:45:35 +0000 UTC]

HAHA
FINALLY!
*sings* internet is for porn... internet is for porn...

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Nakiliel [2006-02-04 18:38:58 +0000 UTC]

You crack me up.

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JenniferStarling [2006-02-02 00:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Kickass-ly awesome.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to JenniferStarling [2006-02-03 00:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.

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redelf [2006-01-20 00:40:14 +0000 UTC]

OOOOO I love this!!!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to redelf [2006-01-20 01:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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sage7 [2006-01-15 04:17:55 +0000 UTC]

so much expression going on here...

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SMH-REDELK In reply to sage7 [2006-01-15 04:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

I love your avatar. KENSIN!!! (hope I spelled his name right)

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sage7 In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-01-15 05:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Kenshin you missed the H. Its cool tho. I wonder if you have played the KOTOR games. They are great for any star wars fan.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to sage7 [2006-01-15 06:30:43 +0000 UTC]

I don't play too many video games. Though the ones I've played and love are Obi-Wan and Jedi Outcast. Both on Xbox. They're great fun.

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sage7 In reply to SMH-REDELK [2006-01-15 18:03:50 +0000 UTC]

You would really like KOTOR. Star Wars Knight of the Old Republic. There are 2 out right now. Thats what I meant by KOTOR.

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