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Description You've seen my scars
But never heard the screams
You didn't see first hand
nightmarish piercing dreams
You've seen my flaws
But have no idea why I'm broken
Why In crowded rooms I remain unspoken
You see the scars left behind
But not why I lack emotion
You see my strength
But these eyes they hold back oceans
They hold back years of abuse
Tired of the commotion
What you don't see
Is that my eyes are now wide open
And what I'm hoping for is peace
My scars are proof that I survived
Piece by bloody piece
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smokingfaces187 - Sanity
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Kpoz90 [2017-03-11 03:45:13 +0000 UTC]

wow this is really good it probably took you hours.

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smokingfaces187 In reply to Kpoz90 [2017-03-11 04:00:32 +0000 UTC]

I write like a faucet it just pours out I wrote this one in like fifteen minΒ 

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Kpoz90 In reply to smokingfaces187 [2017-03-11 04:04:28 +0000 UTC]

It seemed like something you were hurt by and wanted the pain of it to go away. sorry I didn't mean to pry through this comment

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smokingfaces187 In reply to Kpoz90 [2017-03-11 04:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes I have lived an "exciting" live and have been through a lot so this one was directed at how I'm seen and what is beneath the surface of us all for that matter, it's easy to see others flaws buts it's a whole other thing to understand how they got them

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Kpoz90 In reply to smokingfaces187 [2017-03-11 04:16:14 +0000 UTC]

That is really cool.

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smokingfaces187 In reply to Kpoz90 [2017-03-11 04:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I appreciate the feedback! Have a goonightΒ 

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Kpoz90 In reply to smokingfaces187 [2017-03-11 04:27:36 +0000 UTC]

You too

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smokingfaces187 In reply to smokingfaces187 [2017-03-11 04:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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