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I WOULD LOVE TO SEE WHAT YOU THINK OF MY BEAUTIFUL DRAWING!!TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND PLZ CRITIQUE!!1!!
THIS ART BELONGS TO ME DO NOT STEALsdadad
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There's only one thing that I can say about this picture....
f**ing amazing.
Ya, I said it.
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Troll Troll Troll Troll Troll Troll Troll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this deserves a daily deviation
I mean, there couldn't be a better example of a masterpiece. His anatomy is absolutely mind blowing! And not to mention the exquisite details! Its a ponage piece of art without doubt.
I feel like I'm going to faint in its beautiful presence.
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So, as I conclude my critique, I dub this the next wonder of the world.
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YOU. ARE. A. GOD.
NEVER BEFORE HAVE I SEEN SUCH MASTERY, EMOTION, SMOOTHNESS OF LINES, AND ORIGINALITY IN ONE DRAWING.
I BOW TO YOU, THE ART GOD OF GODS ;U;
YOU ARE SO AMAZING, I LOVED THIS AS SOON AS I LAYED EYES ON IT. I WILL NEVER FORGET THE MASTERY AND WILL BE INTRIGUED AND WONDER, HOW DOES SHE DO IT?
THE ANSWER IS, SHE IS AMAZING.
I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY AS THE ART HAS LEFT ME SPEECHLESS
FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER
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This is so epic. It's like trying to tell the world it's emotions and everything through that fake smile and how it's hiding it's true emotions behind it! It makes me want to cry, want to show the world the truth, the artistic-ness behind it! *takes a moment of silence*
Sigh, yes, this is a masterpiece. It has impacted me so much, wrenching my heart in half! Where did this piece of genius come from? You need to share your smartness with me!
Just so beautiful. I have nothing else to say, just nothing. I have to go cry now, bye e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I can't even describe how amazingly emotional this piece is. It speaks to me in so many ways. You can see the depth in the character's eyes and the vision you had while drawing this.... i wish i was that creative!!!
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This is beautiful, by far one of the most amazing things i have seen on this site xD
This drawing had such an impact on me... it made me want to cry and laugh at the same time, absolutely spectacularly fantastic, no improvement needed ;Da.deviantart.net/avatars/y/o/y… " alt=" " title="yoyoranranruuplz"/>
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OK, I'm going to go full crazy horrible on this one.
First off, IT'S A FREAKING STICKFIGURE. It looks like a kindergardener could have drawn better. The legs are disproprtionate, and so are the arms. The eyes are crappy, and look like a scribble you did in two minutes. there are no clothes or shoes either. The guy doesn't even have hair, which I'm not sure if you wanted or not. Even the head isn't round, which I'm pretty sure even MS-Paint has. Frankly, I don't see the point of even drawing this, since you have other deviations that are much better.
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Poor You. You cant see the pure brilliance in this masterpiece.
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The brilliance of stupidity... this guy could do much better...
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SO FANGASMIC AMAZING, I LOVE THE WAY THE CROOKEDNESS CAPTURES THE SADNESS OF LIFE AND HOW HIS FACE IS HAPPY BUT INSIDE HE FEELS TORN and empty and corupted
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE !!!
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Okay let's see. It's a stick figure drawn very unusually. It's only in black and white and the head is barely round. The eyes barely look like eyes and more like a scribble. There is no neck. The body is well too big. There are no hands. This person is not wearing any clothes.
What would make this better is a pen tool, some more dimensions, some shading, more correct anatomy, a background, no matter how lazy it is a background always makes a picture better, and overall a better image. I don't even see what is the point of this.
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U can't see the pure brilliance in this masterpiece.
shame
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nah, i just think im the only one with brains 0.0
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OH GOD IT'S SO AWESOME
The epicness shown in this picture is orgasmic.
It's like I'm watchin' it fly thru space.
The technique used in the masterpiece shown here is amazing, peferct.
The details on the face are astonishing. The eyes and the smile of pure happiness... it's something so epic that it will be remembered for the next 100 generations as an inspirational artwork, and a masterpiece.
No errors in this artwork, full detail.
Completely original.
Perfect technique.
The impact is like a nuclear strike. It's awesomeness beats you up.
An overall beautiful astonishing artwork.
Oh, you know I'm just bein' kidney with ya.
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First of all, It's important that I mention your piece of artwork is wonderfully ground-breaking.Your method of putting your thoughts into your art is deceitfully spectacular. The quality of this artwork makes it clear that you gave it an honest go with your abundant aptitude of skills. The colour of this artwork is obviously conforming for the emotional notion that I contemplate you are trying to capture, but now that I think about it this comment is certainly irrelevant. On the other hand, I contemplate that your implementation of shape could have been a lot better as I feel that it can't equal the elegance found in the rest of the artwork. To complete this critique I would like to mention that it has been a joy to write this review for you and I hope it will energize you to show progress with your excellent piece.
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can't agree more tbh
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You. Are. Now. GREATER THAN. Chuck Norris
You are now Smosh Norris
the style, it's MAGNIFICENT. I can see the thought and care you put into the creation of this wonderful being. I have never before seen something so beautiful. It burns my eyes and my brain to see this image before me. PLEASE! DRAW MORE! THE ARTISTIC WORLD NEEDS YOUR GENIUS!
SMOSHEN IS THE GOD OF THE INTERWEBS.
YOU SHOULD HAVE THIS ON THE FRONT PAGE!
OR MAKE IT A DAILY DEVIATION!
GO FORTH AND DRAW, SMOSHEN!
GOOOOOOOOOO!
:> You are now a god. A GOD!
A GOD, YOU HEAR ME?
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Omg... It's just so... so... beautiful....
H-How do you draw something this amazing?
The lines... so... smooth... sexy... and oh god....
This has got to be the best picture on the whole of dA.
I wish I could say more but.... the whole page would be flooded with words, I don't want damage this masterpiece.
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Stupid
Minimal
Words
Let
Me
Post
This
Plz
Cause
This
Picture
Is
Teh
Epicz
And
Is
Like
Fawking
Awesome
And
Deviant
Art
Needs
Something
Like
This.
Now
Let
Me
Post
This
Smexy
Critique
Please
Cause
Yeah
8C
8C
Sorry
For this pointless text :c
Stupid dA.
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YOU ARE A GOD. this beautiful drawing must have taken you months no YEARS. to plan and complete. i am unworthy to even see this amazing artwork. it burns my eyes. One day i will hunt you down and beg to be your apprentace. You are a master my freind. your hand is stedier than a gods. I bow before your aweosmeness. I REPEAT BEAUTIFUL. IT MAKES ME CRY OCEANS. ;w; I WILL EXPLODE IF I PRINT THIS OUT. ITS JUST SO- PERFECT. ihkjhkjlhdflkjhbvkjdfkjbvnhfkj *DIES*
120 out of 10 my friend.
PURE AMAZINGNESS.
I
JUST
UGHH
IM GOING TO DIE
*DEAD*
(yes. i can die twice)
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Oh my gosh. What the heck is this?! CLEARLY, you've stolen it.
The way his arms have stubs for hands? Umm... I'm pretty sure Powerpuff Girls owns the rights to that. And what's with the legs? You totally ripped the feet from Doodblebob from Spongebob. You've got a lot of nerve...
Furthermore, his hair is way out of style, I mean, come on! And you could have designed his clothing a little better. What he's wearing would be good for a casual party.. or even a pep rally at best.
I cant even begin to express my anger at what you've stolen from his face. If you squint, and look at his eyes, you'll see, clear as day, that they're the same eyes as Kon's, the stuffed lion-thing from Bleach.
Plus, his nose is too perfect to have been drawn by you. Gosh, photoshopped, much?
This is terrible! I suggest you take it off before DA sees it and catches you for stealing, and not marking this deviation as Mature, because this guy is high as f*#@.
-Mrairs
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OH GOD
LAUGHING SO HARD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLL
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lol XD too many people wrote 'good' reviews about it, so i felt it deserved a 'bad' one too!
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i am just
this is the best critique
ever
in the world
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Oh my god this is amazing you won the game.Shsjdksad. The emotion in this just FLASHES like a sparkledog in my eyes, showing off your extreme artistic talent. Perhaps one day I can get up to this level of Chuck Norris. But I deny such entirely.. You will be forever more talented than me you know. <3 I love this artz in general.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.
YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.YOU WIN.
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAH!!!
T-there's absolutely no flaws! I don't know why you even ask for a critique!
It captures everything! Intensity. Beauty. Cuteness. Humor. Grace. It's just so.... so... awesome!
People will see this picture and start ranting to the museums on why this isn't their galleries. Chuck Norris will be in awe over this wonderful piece!
There is no mistakes! It's like you used a human body to model this!
You are gonna be a fantastic artist. Wait, no. YOU ARE THE GODDESS OF ART! If this work gets turned down by even a simple person, the end of the world will come.
This piece of work is awesome. >:'D
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I COULDN'T AGREE MORE. THIS PIECE, WILL GO DOWN IN HISTORY!
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IT WILL BE BETTER THAN ALL THE OTHER EVENTS! D:<
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This is possibly the most amazing drawing I've ever seen.
The legs and arms are beautifully proportioned, as with the head and eyes.
The small tuft of hair really brings life to this.
It's smile just tops it off.
So.. amazing. So touching.
Simply bootyful.
It said my critique was too short, so I'll just put how much this deserves a daily deviation right here.
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I-I just can't.. I CAN'T FORM WORDS!
MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!
This stunning angel.. It hurts to know I inhabit a planet with this amazing godly creature.
First off... THOSE LINES1!11!!
I MEAN, LOOK AT DEM! *reaches and pets* SO SMOOTH!
And those eyes.. Deep and meaningful.. Like a hole.
It makes me want to cry.. But I already am...
Already suggesting this for a DD, and I hope everyone can see this is SO worthy. If it doesn't get one soon I'm going to be oh so mad >.>
I CAN'T STOP STARING IT IS FAR TO BOOTIFUL!!1!!11!
Thank you for blessing us with this beauty!!!
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Fi-First time with a critique and I must say I'm glad this is my first!
I love his smile and how happy it looks~!!! And his body detail is really unique~ The effort put in this can really be seen, especially starting with his head. It's so well done~!! There really isn't ANYTHING I can find wrong with this picture~!!
This is a really cute and awesome drawing, I hope to see more drawings like this around~
It's just so cute~! ><'' Not really what should be said in a critique, but hey...It HAD to be said~
Keep it up~!! :'D
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Eh? Buddy, this is terrible.. You really need to be serious when someone asked to critic something, also you are encouraging laziness for this person. Please try to be smarter when choosing your words and how serious the matter is.. For me, the drawing is over used, I've seen it too many times and should not have been there or be asking for a critic to begin with, I can garentee you that Solar Sands has seen too many of these drawings(Like myself)Please consider being less lazy with this, it's useless...
rating: 0/5=Laziest thing on DA...
So, please... TRY HARDER...
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When I saw this image I just couldn't believe it! It's like everything in life became clear when I saw it! The wiggly, curvy lines of the figure hold so much emotion!
I especially like that he is black, it makes him look solitary and strong int he middle of all that white. I suggest making another piece but next time, make the stick figure white and the rest of the image black! And then you could have a yin and tang image with both of them!!!!!11!!1
You are truly an amazing artist, and I hope that one day I will be able to produce an image as good as this one, so that one day, I can show my bootiful art to the world!!!11!1!
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THIS.
This has no flaws.
NO FLAWS AT ALL.
GIBNGFIG
FANTASTIC.
Look at the head, JUST LIKE A NORMAL HUMAN'S.
And the legs--- THE LEGS, THEY ARE JUST.
JUST NO.
YOU DID NOT DRAW THIS.
Too perfect ;;o;;
It looks like you cut out a human body and just..
PLASTERED IT ON HERE.
YES.
...
I am breath-less. SIMPLY BREATHLESS.
SO, to the critique.
*PROS*
EVERYTHING HERE IS CORRECT TO THE AUTONOMY.
IT FITS LIKE A PUZZLE PIECE ON A PUZZLE BOARD. IF THAT MAKES SENSE.
*CONS*
Nothing to say bad about this.
nope.
not at all.
I am done here.
Good day. -Nodnod-
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This is the best drawing I have ever seen. It looks so realistic! The anatomy is spot on. You must've taken a picture for the background. This has so much meaning, in fact, it's one of the most meaningful pictures I have ever seen. I seriously NEED your autograph because of this picture. And his/her expression is so beautiful! Oh, and a question, how long did this take you? It must have been hours upon hours upon hours of work! And it's also so original, I've never seen anything like it. All in all, this is just beautiful. Too beautiful for words.
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I feel that this is some of your best work, actually. The strength of your lines belies swift strokes of the hand, giving this piece a feeling of speed and momentum, reminding us of the fast pace of modern life. This piece is very 'facebook', very 'twitter', if you will.
And then we come to the face. A smiling face, the face of a businessman facing hard economic realities, struggling to make ends meet, but still trying his best. Like coming home after a bad day on Wall Street, the Dow Jones fell 400 points and your boss cut your hours, only to find that your wife has been having an affair with your best friend behind your back and your children can't afford to buy school lunches. But still that smile, because tomorrow is a new day and there's always a new opportunity in today's fast paced world of day trading.
In all, I would give this piece 0/5 stars.
Keep smiling, America.
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You gr8 if you have sarcasm.
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'i feel that this is some of your best work'
oh my god burrrn
u need some ice smushey because i can feel the burn radiating from here yooo
im kid u gr8 bb
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i love it its amazing every aspect it is nice to look at, from its potato shaped head to its slender body its perfect. i find it amazing how you managed to create something so amazing with nothing but a tablet and pen.
of course i do have to point out a couple problems with it, it seems to be missing several fingers and toes, i understand that this is probably just part of your style, and leaving them out DOES give it a good effect
all together i love it, i think you should do more art like this you are very talented :3
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Not the nest on day...... BEST ON EARTH!!!!!!!
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*da (not day) my auto-correct failed
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That is one retarded potato, then.
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Thats... literally sounds like Prussia..... I guess.....
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i literally cried after reading this
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and i mean that i cried laughing.
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Hahhaha allright :3
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Guys, he posted it for funny critiques to come in.
Also, had you heard of the word: "SCARTASIC"?!
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