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MstJinglez [2011-10-24 19:33:32 +0000 UTC]
He's great! I wish you would have continued doing more shadows/highlights in the rest of him (as you did in the smoke).
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SnailPropulsionLabs In reply to MstJinglez [2011-10-24 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]
I did on the shell , piston heads tracks and wheels but they obviously weren't stong enough, thank you for your observation, i am constantly striving to improve my skills.
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MstJinglez In reply to SnailPropulsionLabs [2011-10-24 20:45:45 +0000 UTC]
I did see them, though I think it is done a bit better on the smoke. Also think it would help for continuity to maybe have on it all, not sure though.
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SnailPropulsionLabs In reply to MstJinglez [2011-10-24 21:13:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, constructive criticism is always welcome.
I'm teaching myself through experimentation.
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SmilingHarrySyphilis [2011-10-24 03:03:10 +0000 UTC]
A poetry suggestion:Les Barker's "My snails have not yet arrived" (transcript available at [link] ). Includes a mention of racing snails (without the joke about the mollusc in question driving a Ferrari 250GTO with an S on the side. Just look at that S car go!)
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