Comments: 24
DianaMoon [2005-10-21 06:36:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the swirl of green and Harry's pained face. Very nice. ^_^
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Anorah [2005-10-19 02:19:42 +0000 UTC]
I like that its pretty cool. I'm not to good (code for not good at all) with doing work through the computer than again I don't have a prog for it. Your work is amazing.
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pegasiuz [2005-10-19 02:00:37 +0000 UTC]
awesome , very good job
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Snavender [2005-10-18 23:11:28 +0000 UTC]
Hand love. And green love.
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girl-farting [2005-10-18 21:22:36 +0000 UTC]
Lovely composition--and the lighting is fantastic. And all the details, like the grass and stars. It reminds me of a tinted etching, actually. Especially the figure of Harry at the bottom. Whee, fragments!
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roguefeline [2005-10-18 14:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Critique welcome...aren't I glad you always put that little mark there?
This is a great picture. As soon as I saw the "Whip" title in my watch area I knew I was going to like this. And I do.
A few nit-picky things that really have nothing to do with the picture, but just because I'm nitpicky: the end twirl on the whip looks slightly un-whippish. Mainly because I think the whip wouldn't have that many curls. But hey, it's magic, and the end twirl does add a nice bit of...I dunno. Something nice. Because the light is so thin there, but Harry's expression so intense. Contrasts nicely. I think a way of expressing this is going back to the scene in GoF when Voldemort merely strokes Harry's cheek and he recieves so much pain. And I think the clothy thing there is supposed to be Harry's leg, but I think it's a little too bent to the side and not attached enough to the body.
But the hand...*worships the hand* WHAT A GREAT HAND!!! I think the whiteness of it contrasts nicely to the black background. It's the starknes that catches your eye. Especially since the rest of the picture is softer and a little blurrier, and the hand is sharp, well-defined, and a very brightish white. The dark parts on the fingers and back really add to it.
Must compliment you on the grass. Nice grass. Good grass. Thin, not too bunchy, a little wavy and blurry. Adds to the picture nicely. Harry's glasses are nice as well. I noticed that the little white upper (lower?) parts reflect the light. It's a nice touch.
In all, a very nice picture.
Not to mention that Harry is in PAIN as well. *hugs herself in happiness* Hehehehe....
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roguefeline In reply to Snapesforte [2005-10-19 13:35:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh man! That looks *shriek* SO MUCH BETTER!!! Now let me see, what can I nitpick here...not to bother you of course, I just like to nitpick...
I think it looks a little sheer and not quite enough rounded. If the colors and dark/light areas weren't there, I would say it looked great. But the dark part on the leg, the really green part, looks slightly flat. Perhaps if it were curved a little more I would like it.
But as I said, I'm a nitpicker. Can't think of anything else, really.
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Rubbertje [2005-10-18 10:46:41 +0000 UTC]
Holy ****! Amazing! Great light-effect! That looks so awesome!
Very cool magical mystical whip. The atmosphere in this pic is what I like most.
Great colourtheme with the yellow-greenish too!
Keep up the good work!! ^^ (and I know you will).
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blue-nadir [2005-10-18 08:25:10 +0000 UTC]
Great lighting effects. I also love seeing Harry in pain for some reason... *cough*
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Snapesforte In reply to blue-nadir [2005-10-18 09:06:17 +0000 UTC]
Because he deserves it. Ooh, Sectumsempra - for enemies - I wonder what that does? Oh, hullo Draco. Hmph.
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blue-nadir In reply to Snapesforte [2005-10-18 22:40:28 +0000 UTC]
It is all about SNAPE folks! Admit it! The whiney kid in the glasses is just the narrator!
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obfuscatesart [2005-10-18 06:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work on the lighting. The emotion comes across very powerfully, nice work.
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cellancoly [2005-10-18 06:37:12 +0000 UTC]
Ow!..ouch. I think i felt that too. This is truly amazing work
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