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sneww — you have your dreams i have mine
Published: 2012-08-01 11:27:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 692; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 15
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hah just a practice but it was really fun i mean look at snew's butt what a gorgeous butt it is.
Butt yes i really like how it turned out!
i need to draw snew with soda more /rolls around
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Hello. To start of this critique, heres the order i will judge:
Ears: One ear, though clearly at different layers one is bigger than the other in width. They are a lovely color, but i would have gone a little darker on the backlying ear for some simple solid shading.
Eyes: You can clearly distinguish one eye, but with some searching you can see the other eye is winking. I would continue the line to make a cutoff oval, and make the other eye open.
Tuft of head hair: lovely, shaded well, gives it some depth, no criticism here.
Arms: Good shading on the back arm, the angle of the paw is kinda bothering me. I would change it to match the other one. the other has more defined lines than the other, so i would work on consistency on linework.
legs: Back leg has a good angle, good shading, good form. front leg, the paw is larger than the ankle near the top causing abruption visually.
Now, of course, the butt: Good shape, not too big, not too small. Good smooth shape, but it looks more furry than the rest of the body with some indenting linage.
Tail: Some inconsistent lining, good transition from small to large at the end of the tail. The black belt is extremely visually disrupting. i would erase it completely, unless its a part of your character.
Very well done.
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HAAHHA ;w; I'm sorry I lost it when you mentioned the butt THANK YOU FOR THE HELP EEE uvu
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thank but no
and by the way
what tool do u use to make this perf fur===??
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Snew reminds me of Gatomon here ;A;
adorable i faved it yes
ps i see the details on her butt
what a detailed butt
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